We all know the Great and Powerful Trixie as Equestria's premier travelling entertainer, but what was she like as a young filly? What inspired her to be the showmare supreme we all know and love? Here we have a collection of little stories featuring filly Trixie!
Got a suggestion for an idea for an short story featuring filly Trixie? Please share in the comments, and we'll see what happens!
Also, absolutely do not check out Tiny Twilight Tales by my nemesis in fluff, Foals Errand. Just don't do it! Filly Trixie is far more adorable than Twilight!
Pre-read by Zomg and Foals Errand
Edited by bathroomstahl.
Edited again by Noble Thought. You all rock!
Chapters (7)
Trixie is better than Twilight.
6448472 there both pretty awesome if you ask me
but foal Trixie is so much cuter
Let's see filly Trixie on her birthday, or maybe she gets a cold and has to stay in bed for a day. Leaving her father to take care of her.
Or, maybe filly Trixie bumps into a certain other filly briefly.
I blame all of this happening on Twaith, and TOTALLY support more fillies running around taking comments.
Also, I want Trixie to meet ghosts.
I will see you on the battle field!
6448635 Guess it's only a matter of time til someone dos one of these for Fluttershy or Sunset Shimmer.
6448934 *Jumbled looks side to side* Nooooo, never.
6448962 Were it not for the fact that I don't want to be accused of jumping onto a bandwagon, I'd probably write one.
I suggest a story where, before Trixie ever wanted to be a magician, her parents hire a certain Albino Mare with Rainbow Magic who wears a Blue Pendant to perform at one of her Birthday Parties, and so dazzles her with wonderful Illusions that she wants to become "Great And Powerful, Just Like Her."
Hint Hint.
6448908 this isgoing to be epic!
6448934 I am now on the look out for a sunset shimmer one. The. Hunt. Is. ON!
Oh, you lying sonovabitch. I had nothing to do with this bout of craziness! The birth pun fic, yes, I was all over that one. This? Nope! Not me at all!
There's far too much Trixie, and not nearly enough Spitfire for me to be involved in this... this...
Heresy.
I'm gonna end up doing 'Spitfire Shorties' at some point, aren't I?
>dark blue hoove
Is this a story about my OC now? Cause trixie is light blue.
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6448499 True words!
6448524 Sick day Trixie? I like that.
6448908 The fields of battle shall be awash with d'waaas!
6449717 So modest.... Don't try to deny your love for the Great and Powerful Trixie, Zomg. Embrace her as we have...
6450194 Good catch. Thanks for pointing that out.
6451523 heres my list of top 5 cutest
fluttershy
derpy
Trixie
twilight
sunset shimmer
and theres my list
6451523 hank celestia I didnt come off as rude
And the winner for cutest filly goes to *drum roll* TRIXIE!
So adorable
Trixie will always out-cute Twilight.
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*hurk* the diabeetus!!! too, much, d'aaaaaaaaw!
Quite adorable. My natural bias towards Trixie has me rating this higher than Foals' work. She is my favorite character from G4. :D
I'm now wondering if Lulu was her mother's name...
Trixie wins, adorality!
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Name of Story: Tiny Trixie Tales
Grammar score out of 10 (1 is grammar that needs to be worked upon as basic principles such as capitalization and spelling is an issue, and 10 is impeccable): 10
Pros
1. Trixie is so cute!
2. Interesting backstory that you have established regarding Trixie’s father Maximus also being a stage performer.
3. Story has nearly perfect grammar. I don’t think I found a single mistake.
Cons (The rules say that I’m supposed to find three, but it’s really hard in a story like this. So I will do my best. Bear in mind that these are mostly minor nitpicks
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1. The story is marked with a comedy tag. That is your decision, though I am not sure that I would classify it as a comedy. It’s cute, but not necessarily “ha ha” funny.
2. One or two uses of odd phrasings, see below.
3. One or two uses of passive voice, see below.
Notes Section
Odd sentence phrasing:
“As one they lifted up into the sky and flew around—much to the delight of every audience member.”
“As one” is a curious bit of phrasing. should that be “all at once”, or “one by one?”
Use of passive voice:
“The stage was set, the lights were dim, a hush had fallen over the crowd, an anxious breath was held for what was to come.”
How about, “they anxiously held their breath for what was to come.”
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The Gweat and Powewful Twixe is just so adorable
6541700 Yes she is. Far better than Twilight by miles!
The war of the fluff continues.
6541831 it's official trixie is cuter then twilight as a filly
Aw, so cute. Now, can we get a chapter with Trixie and her mother? Or does Trixie not have a mom?
6543223 Not to worry, things will be revealed in time.
Awwwww! Poor Cuddles! I hope Trixie got him back.
Is Cuddles a stuffed changeling?
6717777 Like a plague, Cuddles never goes away.
6717991 Indeed he is.
Ah, so now we know what happened to Trixe's mother.
6718456 Don't be entirely sure. Most parents/adults usually keep a lot from their kids because they wouldn't understand or would take out of context, and Maximus is no different. More shall be learned in future chapters.
(Reads first several paragraphs)
Hilarious and cute!
(Reads the Ferris Wheel scene)
Oh...
Stupid feelings making me feel things...
Leave it to Trixie to be a picky eater.
This i s what I thought of when I read this chapter. Trixie still out cutes Twilight 100%
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She would be. The great and Picky eater Trixie!
6944994 Now let's see tiny Trixie when she catches a cold, and her father has to take care of her.
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The great and powerful cold... it sucks.
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6945023 Look forward to another entry then.
Adorable as always!
I guess the cold really bothered Trixie, anyway. (I'm not sorry.)
Aww she has little dolly friends!
Little Trixie is so adorable!
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Why would you do that? 
When it comes to the story, this is definitely adorable, and earned the fave/upvote. I see Calvin has influenced Trixie's imagination.
In terms of the writing, if you don't mind my pointing out some things:
—There are a bunch of spelling and grammar errors throughout. I'd recommend getting an editor.
—There's a lack of consistency with a few things.
> You've given Trixie two names: Beatrice and Beatrix. Pick one and stick with it. You only used 'Beatrix' once, so I'd personally go with the former.
> Your use of w's in place of some r's due to Trixie's age is cute, but again, it's inconsistent. I have noticed that you have her use r's properly when she's imagining, but w's in her 'real' dialogue. That distinction is clear, but there have been uses of r's in her regular dialogue when there should have been w's—depending on how extreme you want it to be—as well as w over-usage later on, when earlier chapters showed her not using w's in cases where she does later.
I don't know if/when you intend to update this again, but I would take those notes into consideration. Please don't take offense—I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism.
Just thought I'd mention that that isn't how colds work, despite popular belief.
8069207 As a medical professional, I know all too well. :) But seeing how this is cartoon logic, we'll allow suspension of disbelief.
8069607 Being cold probably didn't help her immune system anyway
8069618 Nope, not too well. It's what she gets for skipping school to play.
8069626 I'd never get away with that