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Feenkatze


Just a cat pretending to be a human pretending to be a cat on the internet.

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Luna, the Princess of the Night, still struggles living in a world that has aged one thousand years in her absence, nagged by the guilt of past mistakes. Derpy Hooves, on the other hoof, would be glad to just get through her day without causing too much damage. When, one fateful evening, they bump into each other, neither of them expects that it would change their lives. What does the future hold for the two of them? At least one thing is certain: whatever happens, there will be muffins.


Cover by me (source).
Proofread by PoisonClaw and SongCoyote.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 62 )

This is a nice story. I really like Derby and of course Luna is best princess! Can't wait for more chapters!

"I'm liking how the story going bro."
-Johnny Bravo

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Thanks, glad you liked it so far. If I can promise one thing, it's that things will get even cuter :pinkiesmile:

This is a lovely story. The interactions are adorable and the interplay between them is fun to watch.

Definitely one of those stories that deserves a lot more attention than it's gotten so far. I look forward to watching it play out. :twilightsmile:

bravo on such a fine story! its great how you have luna and derpy interacting. and the way you show how they are feeling is fabulous , kudos to you and thank youthis fun story!

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Thank you! I certainly hope that it will acquire some more readers; you'd think that there are enough shipping fans on this website. Well, time will tell.

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Glad you like it :twilightsmile:

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That's great praise, thanks!

You once had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.

luna... levitate derpy with its magic and put her in bed now!

great great chapter! they so deserve each other! best couple! thank you for such a fine and heartwarming story!

Ohhhhh i cant wait! I love this story *sqeeeeee!*:pinkiehappy:

Damnit, the cute! You're making me squee! :pinkiesad2:

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I'm doing my best not to disappoint :twilightsheepish:
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Hm, that would be interesting. But, you'll see, you'll see.
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Glad to see you (still) enjoy the story!
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As I intented ... :raritywink:

As long as there ismuffins, I will be happy.
Muffins is love, Muffins is life

Now you've done it. You got into the Feature Box.

The cuteness shall consume us all! :yay:

Such an excellent story. :pinkiehappy:

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What have I started :rainbowlaugh:. But I can't lie, muffins sure are tasty.
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Whoa, I didn't even notice. Thanks for pointing it out, mate.

Love this ship , so i love da story.. Keep the good work , like+fav :twilightsmile:

as luna would say the fun has been double! what a great and wonderful story you have written. you truly are a gifted writer and wonderful story teller! bravo to you!

This story is cute, I enjoy it immensely ^^ Good job ;)

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Thank you all. This is quite flattering :twilightsmile:

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Sorry, I don't know what went wrong :derpytongue2:

Need...more...Need...Muffins!
Love the story. :derpytongue2:

Wait.... *stares at incomplete tag*
...YESH

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Oops. Um. Thank you for noticing :twilightblush:. It seems as if writing about Derpy has left its mark on me.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!

In the description, I'm pretty sure you meant fateful, not faithful.

bravo bravo i can not say enough about how wonderful ,heart warming and beautiful this story was! best couple now and always forever. you truly are a master story teller! thank you !

6468025 And I'm glad that you wrote it:twilightsmile:

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Ah well, the discription: the part that gets written the last and is controlled the least :twilightblush:. Thanks for catching that!
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Once again, thank you. A number of people, and you in particular, have been quite active on this story, and it's encouraging to get that kind of support, making it worth the long hours that went into this.

You people are a fantastic audience :pinkiehappy:

6468076 *fixed complete tag* Someone, somewhere, in a another multiverse, made a sequel.

Seldom have I hated to see a 'complete' tag more so than now. :raritydespair:
This was such a beautiful story. A flawlessly cut gem. And it ended perfectly. Thank you so much. :pinkiehappy:



PS. I also hate to beg and or wheedle, but if you were to decide to sequel this story, perhaps a bit in the future, maybe the wedding, or after... well let's just say I'd be here to read it. :raritywink:

There's an enthusiastic honesty to derpy that's not naive and its really endearing. It matches well with Luna's tired somberness.

Poor derpy. Yet its kinda understandable for all that its terrible. I wonder if ponies still remember the town hall thing.

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Well, I have nothing planned yet, and even though it wouldn't be impossible in the event of an idea crossing my mind, I wouldn't count on there being a sequel. Too many ships, too little time, you know? But I feel flattered that you people would want one.

6471556 Aww. Awesome story anyway!:twilightsmile:

found a mistake

but rhinoceroses didn’t have a reputation for being good masseurs – and she was gasping for air.

it should be rhinos for plural instead of rhinoceroses

6471556 NOOOOOOOOOO :raritydespair: i want more lunaXderpy

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As I wrote it I wasn't actually sure what the plural was so I looked it up, and Merriam-Webster says it's Rhinoceroses.

That was one of the sweetest, most adorable things I've read in a while. Kudos!

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

This was very cute. I wonder why this ship is not done more often? I was tearing up at the end there. Great work. Defiantly going in the favourite:derpytongue2:

7186898 Aw :twilightsmile:. All cuteness considered it's not the most obvious ship by any standarts, so what can you do. I'm glad you enjoyed this story though!

This was really enjoyable to read, and you made both the characters work really well. Then Luna pulled out the chest of stars, and it hit a whole new level of beautiful.

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