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Utaan - Imploding Colon



Rainbow Dash endures many trials to reach the edge of the world.

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Well, Here's Another Fine Mess

One ruby eye opened.

Torchlight.

A second eyelid fluttered.

An earthen ceiling loomed above, held in place by numerous wooden crossbeams.

"Mrmmmfnngh..." Rainbow Dash stirred. She squirmed left... then to her right. Her fuzzy muzzle scrunched, unscrunched. She moved her forelimb up to rub it... but it wouldn't budge. "Huh? What the...?" Her head tilted down.

The mare's limbs and wings were locked behind her back with several lengths of tightly-tied twine. She lay on a simple canvas cot, surrounded by stacks of wooden crates full of dredge coal and digging supplies. Glancing down at her legs—as well as upside-down—she discovered that she was situated in the center of a very long tunnel stretching like a winding serpent somewhere underground.

"Mmmm... great..." Rainbow sighed, eyes rolling. She spotted a distant table beneath a dangling torch where her saddlebags were hanging off a chair's flankrest. "With my luck, it's probably diamond dogs." She sighed, nostrils flaring. "... ... ...!!!" She looked down at her neck.

The Element of Loyalty glittered with each flicker of flame.

"Mmmmm... whewwww..." She slumped back down on the cot, staring straight up. The mare gulped, twitching slightly. "Unfamiliar ceil—"

Fl-Flash! Fluttershy descended through the earthen material above, glowing with lavender light. "Oh! Oh thank goodness!" A smile crossed her nervous lips. "You're awake!"

"Flutters..." Rainbow winced. "So great to see you." She gulped. "Guess it's... hoping too much to ask if we're at a resort hotel."

"Mmmm... well..." Fluttershy shrugged, squirming in mid-air. "All things considered, we have been in worse places."

"All things considered..." Rainbow Dash tiredly smirked. "...that doesn't exactly mean much."

Fluttershy gulped. "Good point."

"Chuuu?" Pinkie Pie's head poked upside down through the ceiling.

"Pinkie." Fluttershy pivoted. "Go tell the other girls that Rainbow Dash has woken up."

"Chuuuuuu." Pinkie nodded, then ascended the way she came.

"Mrmmfff..." Rainbow Dash grimaced, quivering in her restraints.

"Oh, I'm so sorry, Rainbow." Fluttershy floated down to her, wincing. "That must be putting so much pressure on your bad wing."

"Yeah, well, the key thing is not to think about it."

"Erm... good point..."

"So..." Rainbow nevertheless grimaced, eyes darting across the underground environment. "Should I start asking questions or will you explain it all?"

"Well, Rainbow." Fluttershy cleared her throat. "When you fell stopped sliding down the mountainside—"

"I banged my head and knocked myself out."

"—just twenty feet away from where a bunch of stallions were camped out. They tied you up and brought you here."

"And where's here?"

"From what Rarity and Twilight have overheard, it would seem as though we're about thirty feet beneath the surface of Braum. It's a major trading point for ponies trotting back and forth between Lichen and Dust Prefecture. Lots of miners and economic partners to miners live here... with their families." Fluttershy stifled a cough. "The upper town is also... uhhhh... covered from head to hoof with Rainbow Rogue wanted posters."

Rainbow groaned. "Figures. Just my luck."

"The... uhm... particular band of stallions who brought you in took a very strange route to get here."

"Probably trying to elude competitors." Rainbow's muzzle scrunched. "Including the Talon."

Fluttershy nodded. "We have heard them mention the Talon several times. Looks like they would rather earn the bounty than turn you in to government officials."

"If they're so fond of making bits..." Rainbow looked down at her neck. "...then how come my pendant's still attached?"

"Oh, they tried taking it off." Fluttershy winced, her coat forming goosebumps. "But... b-but they put it back on as soon as they saw the horns glowing."

Rainbow closed her eyes, taking a deep breath. "Thank Celestia..."

"You were really... really out of it, Rainbow Dash."

"Guess it's a good thing. For their sake."

"I suppose." Fluttershy bore a tiny smile. "But, y'know, for a bunch of ponies bent on binding and selling an equine soul for bits, they're... actually not all that bad."

"Only you, Fluttershy."

"I mean it. Several of them have families and foals and friends throughout the village—"

"How about getting out of here, huh?" Rainbow's eyes stabbed like ruby daggers. "What's the possibility of that?"

"Well, you're up. That's... that's a first step."

"Any simple way out of this spot?" Rainbow craned her neck. "Just what are these tunnels for, anyways?"

"It's... not exactly clear." Fluttershy brushed her bangs back as she looked both ways down the passage. "Rarity says that at least two-thirds of Braum is built underground. Most of the buildings are just turf houses built out of the earth."

"I guess it's how they keep warm."

"Right. It's... v-very cold above ground," Fluttershy said. "I guess it's the Rohbredden we all imagined while at Red Barge."

Rainbow nodded. "Bet these tunnels come in heavy when they get snowed in."

"Right." Fluttershy looked at Rainbow. "Anyways, Pinkie, Twilight, and Rarity are above ground, listening in on as many conversations as they can."

"Just how many dudes brought me down here?"

"At least twenty. But there hasn't been enough time to count them all—or tell them apart. They're very important members of the village, it would seem."

"Just how big is Braum, anyways?"

"Not sure." Fluttershy blinked. "Smaller than Kunmane and Riverstem, but about as busy as the Four Braziers Inn. Lots of ponies coming and going."

"I can see how it's easy to hide someone or something here." Rainbow sighed, glancing at the torchlight. "What of the Talon?"

"It's... fuzzy at the moment, Rainbow Dash," Fluttershy explained. "They're definitely interested in Braum, but they seem to be keeping their distance."

"They're smart enough to know what's going on here," Rainbow said. "Probalby surrounding the place from all sides."

"Maybe."

"We're going to need more info if we wanna get an edge over both the Talon and these new flankholes. Although... nrnnnghh... what I wouldn't give for a strong pair of scissors right about now."

"I'm s-sorry, Rainbow. I really wish we could help you with that right now."

"Don't worry, Fluttershy. I'll think of something."

"But—"

Rainbow motioned with her head. "What you can do is fly back up to the surface and give the girls an extra pair of ears." Her eyes narrowed. "These punks think they can outsmart their competition, and I wanna know why."

Fluttershy nodded vigorously. "Okay, Rainbow." She flew up.

Rainbow called after her: "And while you're at it, get Rarity to scan for the best route out of this town once we bust out!" She looked left and right. "...cuz we are gonna bust out... totally... g-gonna..." She gnashed her teeth and started writhing in her binds. "Rgggh! Just once... I wanna get captured by bunch of harem fillies who don't know how to tie worth crud! Rrnnngh—owwww!" She squinted one eye shut, wincing from her injured wing. "Ow ow ow ow..."

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