poor luna

I am obliged to call you a faggot for calling greentext meme arrows.

On a more serious note, this is amazing and hits all the best aspects of smut with Nightmare, looking forward to more.

You sir, deserve a like. This is one of the best romance stories I have seen in this site.

Jedi Master Quan Chi was seriously the best part of the entire Ride to Hell LP. Also what happened to the Mane 6? Are they dead? Zambamboes? On indefinite vacation in the shadow realm? Truly these are the mysteries.

Meme arrow bullshit will earn you a dislike. You better have a good story to make up for that.

For now I reserve my judgment until I read the extent of your HF.

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:^)

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I deliberately left that ambiguous. Consider them "defeated" in some nondescript way, whether they be banished, on the run, or simply sulking in Ponyville, stewing in frustration over how hard they got their asses kicked.

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I'm sorry that you dislike le epic joke pointers so much that you'd dislike the story over it, even though I went through the trouble of REMOVING all of those, and properly rewriting the story into prose form.

I'd say everything good about, it but all you have to do is re-read the story. Nice work.

Poor Nightmare...

"Ohoho!" You cast your head back, chuckling heartily, then wipe away a figurative tear from your eye. "Oh, Anonymous, dearest... If We may make this hypothetical comparison, We do not read an erotic novel for the 'immersive story', now do We?"

You beautiful bastard.

This is actually really good. The title could have been more creative, but the writing style is very pleasing; minimum grammatical errors, too. The character perspectives and development are smooth and delivers the intended emotions well. I enjoyed reading this and would definitely like to read more.

Also, you deserve the condemnations for referring to greentext as meme arrows. Even though I giggled at that.

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When I was thinking of the title, I kinda wanted to make it comically simple.

What's wrong, don't you like meme arrows? What about the triple meme triangles?

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So.. Is it still the same six minutes?

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The same six minutes you gave me.

It was the least I could do for a friend.

Lol. Anon has left the ever-stoic Queen stumped.

6680206 I said you had better have a good story to make up for it. I have not read it, and have reserved my judgment until such a time as I do read it. So I have not down-voted it. I just get angry when I read the term meme arrows.

To put it in perspective; as a judge, I'm starting you with a score of -1 instead of zero.

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For the record, I called them meme arrows to be ironic.

Gosh darn it Anon...! Heh... I'm gonna wait for a sequel that probably won't ever happen...

GREAT STORY!

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Well, there's still one more part coming up with more horse sex.

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The title's actually fine for me, given how comically hilarious and serious the story is at the same.

yer a faggit lel for ze meme arows
Just kidding. It's obligatory.

6681280 hi5

I've been trying to find a small romance between anon and another character of MLP without clop for a while, now....

....still haven't found it.

I'm okay with more.

> Writes a storing featuring Anonymous
> Doesn’t use the new Anonymous tag
> Calls >implying “meme arrows”

On a scale of 1 to 10 you’re literally worse than Hitler.

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Short non‐clop romance featuring Anonymous? Good fucking luck.

Yep. Definitely getting a few spots in my shelves. Favorites, comedy and clop, for sure.

POWERBALLS?!?!

Damn!

"We do not read an erotic novel for the 'immersive story', now do We?"

.... Maybe. MonQue is a heartwarming story about a boy and his lamia don't fucking judge me moon lady.

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Link?

Anyone else see the reference to Modern Warfare with this line; 'He simply looks up to you and presses a single finger to his lips. "Remember, no Russian." ' ?

7434705 A lot of things get referenced in this story.

"FINISH THE JOB, JAMES. BLOW THEM ALL TO HELL."

My fucking sides.

I love Goldeneye.

Greasy applejack should have poured grease all over the fully clothed forms of luna and anon as celestia's ghost watched from the sidelines...

Your heart soars in your chest as his words wash over you. "Y-you... think We are a 'great pony'...?"

"Well, to me, you are, anyways." He shrugs. "I'm pretty sure your coup and all those executions you've been doing have been pissing off the rest of the country, but... meh. Fuck 'em."

Equestria definitely needed more minds like this. Just apathetic and selfish enough to do what needs to be done to advance your personal goals, but not crazy and psychotic enough to go on murder sprees for fun.

Man that was really good.

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I wanna read that book!

" My feet hurt... "

Same, same.

"See, that's the funny thing about dreams, you almost always forget what they were about as soon as you wake up-" A quiet splash interrupts you. "Uh... Luna? I'd kinda like to eat my breakfast, could you please take your face out of it?"

EXECUTIVE PRODUCER
LARRY DAVID

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"If Relationship Luna walks through that door, she will KILL Independent Luna!"

If We may make this hypothetical comparison, We do not read an erotic novel for the 'immersive story', now do We?"

I admit i actually did this once

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I mean, that's what I'm doing here right now. What I'm rereading it for (well, that and to refresh my memory before reading the sequel that I only just discovered). Then again, she doesn't have internet porn.

... although I suppose she basically does, actually, when you consider all the wet dreams she can peek in on. Or create.

To your right, you spotted two more humans sitting on a couch who looked rather... "animated" in appearance. One of them had a beard of black, and wore a similarly coloured wool hat, imprinted with the image of a skull. For a symbol so bold, the human in question looked rather harmless. Another human sat next to him, and had hair of crimson, the likes you had never seen before, though he seemed to have more of it upon his chin than on his head. Shouts of frustration and profanity came frequently from the pair, almost always followed by uproarious laughter. You could not tell what exactly what they were doing, but they seemed to be engaged in whatever was happening on that glowing rectangle in front of them. Occasionally, you could hear them shout something about how they were "Riding to Hell."

I know this is a reference to some Youtubers but I can’t remember which.