Sunset was never friends with any of them; it was all a big hoax.
It took some time, but they finally figured her out.
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More please
Word count: 3000. Exactly 3000!
Finally somebody who shares my fetish!
I'll read it when I'll have the time!
When will there be more chapters? 
6463486 There might be, but I might be too lazy. :P
(6463098, this goes for you, too) I'll try to put in one more [concluding] chapter, though. :3
6463100 It was actually 3,004 when I finished. I shaved four (kind of unneeded) words off of the 'final' copy then sent it to be published. :3 :P
6463839 Yas
But... but she was my favorite character. DAMN YOU SUNSET!!!
Not a big fan of the "Sunset still might be evil" idea here, but the story itself was nicely written. Thank you for entering!
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6467167 I just took the idea from one of your blogs. :P (the one where you were wondering if there was a story where, they were in an alternate universe, and Sunset was still 'evil'/never reformed)
Your welcome! I can hardly wait to see the results! :3
6467167 Yeah, I'm not a big fan of that either...
Makes me sad
Nce to present Discord as an illusionist/hypnotist in the human world, he and Pinkie were very characterful here. Sad ending; reforming isn't always simple as another blast of friendship laser.
MOAR!
This story has a problem I've observed in other stories, which is that it's not so much a story as it is the first chapter of a story, except there are no chapters after the first. It's like if I read only the first chapter of a book; it's not complete in any real way.
Hi
I noticed your fic and got curious. The concept of Sunset Shimmer never reforming is interesting. In fact, her reformation in the film has plot holes.
I have read a few fics that tried to rationalize it or remake it. Some of them are pretty good.
Anyway, your story is interesting. A lot of the writing needs work, most of the problems have more to do with the flaws of Equestria Girls in general then anything you’ve done.
Despite the fic’s faults, you got me hooked. Will you continuity your fic and reveal what happened to Sunset? Or should I give up hoping?
God bless
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