Jonathan is the son of a starship captain. He used a special serum that the doctors have made on the starship, that turns everyone that drinks it into techni colored ponies, and became a pony. A alicorn to be exact. He now goes by the name of nova gear, the alicorn of machines. But one day on his birthday, a horrible accident happens and Jonathan's life will turn upside down. Will he make a new life on a new planet that has ponies like him, or will he be stuck with the dread of losing someone special eating away at his mind.
This seems interesting since instead of the ponies who made the serum it was the humans!!!
And to see that they are going through with it without losing their mind makes me a little bit happier that this wont turn into a run-of-the-mill TCB.
I shall add this to read later and hope for more updates.
Until then, May the light of Gaben Shine over you!
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6427794 OMFG Lmao that picture. any way thank you man, I am already making the first chapter so it should be done by today if I can.
wait...
Today? so that means....
My god you're in the USA
6427835 and can you guess he reference in this chapter?
6427825
For being a follower of Gabe Newell here is the steam summer sales card.
Use it wisely my child.
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6427838 OMFG I am dying over here.
I hope you know what the tragedy tag means.
Also, having a proofreader or an editor wouldn't be a bad idea.
6427855 I know what it means, don't worry. And yea, I do have one, I give him the chapters to see what he thinks before I publish it.
6427846
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6427859 I meant more of a grammatical editor, but alright. The story itself is alright, I sure do hope you continue this. I'm sure this plot has been done many times before, but if you try hard enough you can take this story in the right direction. It has potential.
6427866 thank you, and will will make sure I will. Or I will go crazy.
6427865 *dies from laughing too hard, continues to laugh even in death*
6427877
you have dis-pleased Gaben.
May steam summer sales destroy your world.
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6427901 oh man, please stop I can't stop laughing.
6427907
Loominarty is Gabe.
Where is the next chapter?!
DO YOU WANT GABE TO CANCEL STEAM SUMMER SALES?!!!!!
Oh no... Gabe please don't..... Gabe....Gabe!!! THAT WAS HALF-LIFE 3 NO!!!!
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6427941 it's going to be a while before I post the next chapter. So please wait.
im going to need more PATIENCE!!!!
6428023 will do
6428036
Is Nova Gear landing in the Crystal Empire? I'm just curious since I also have an OC alicorn focused fic in that area.
6428594 no, he's landing near ponyville. With the princesses visiting twilight.
6428629 Ah. Well then, I shall patiently await that encounter.
6428642 in deed
Let's go over the check list here, bud XD
-many grammatical errors? Check.
-setting development? Eenope!
-tears? Almost.
-can't wait for more? Check check check ck check check and....check check check check check check check check check!
6430308 lmao, hey its my first tragedy story, so yea.
6430330 verdict: *poke*
6430337 Lmao
6430339 buddy, I can has cupcake? The...the rainbow one please! From pinkie pie, but she doesn't just give them away cause they're...made with a special ingredient.
6430360 Lmao, and oh man.
6430364 oh man, what!?
6430391 cupcakes.
6430400 then...who is that? *points to a cyan Pegasus who looks exactly like rd* XD
6430420
6430420 great, just great.
6430437what...
6430456 nothing, nothing at all.
6430494 lololol
6430512 lol
6430542 hiiii
6430575
6430575 YO
6430599 *kills spike, and tears his body up until it's just his head and his digestive track hanging from his neck* I made me a yo-yo!
6430606 just what the check is wrong with you man.
6430668 I dunno. You gots another dislike XD
6430673 hey, I knew that I would get some dislikes, cause this is my first try at doing a tragedy story. So I don't mind If I have a few dislikes.
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please?
6430700 will do, coming right up!
6430687 I usually get like two or three for every ten up votes. But, the seqeul to a day as Vinyl Scratch is one every twenty up votes which is really good actually. Me and pinklestia make a good team :D
6430703 lol, Niiice.