A Mother and Daughter
A Mother and Daughter
Sunlight shone through the closed curtains and on to my closed eyelids, which slowly opened in response to this.
“Ugh, morning real-life cartoon world that really needs to be visited by my favorite antihero, Gundarr.”
I sat up in a… moon shaped bed. I’m hoping I don’t have to sleep with her long. I’m hoping to get back soon.
I know I slept with her for long. Because she told me so when she invaded my dream.
Ruined my Fallout 4 wasteland dream (thinking it was horrible memories mixed with delusions of humans), telling that she is sleeping right by me and will keep me safe and all that rubbish.
Stretching my limbs I stood up. To be honest, the mattress is really comfy. Walking to the end of the bed, I readied to jump to the floor. It was time to make another escape attempt.
Okay. The floor is not that far away, so just a quick jump down and…
*clip-clop, clip-clop*
*sound of talking*
Shit! Someone’s coming.
I shot straight back to the pillow end of the bed and sat on the said pillow. The doors opened, and in walked Luna, the mare that ruined my Fallout dream and, carrying something in her magical aura. She was then followed by a pony I had never seen before.
The pony was a unicorn mare with a white coat, dark grey mane with a white streak, light blue eyes, wearing a frilly lacy apron, and her flank mark was a feather duster at an angle with a couple of feathers falling off of it, she was also holding a feather duster in her light blue aura.
She was looking at Luna in a way I could not figure out.
“Um, don’t mind me saying, Your Highness. But isn’t she a… little… old?”
Okay, judging by her appearance, I’m going to assume that this mare with an overdone British accent, is probably a servant.
Luna looked at her with a raised eyebrow. This gave me a chance to look at the thing she was carrying.
It was a folded up… something.
“Nonsense, Feather dust. She is foal, and all the mothers I’ve seen with foals had one of these.” Was Luna’s response as she tried to unfold the thing she was carrying. “Now, how do you open this again?”
“But your highness. The foals you’ve seen in those are usually barely 2 years old, and by strictly observing your daughter…” She gestured towards me as she said this, “I’d say she is 4 or 5 years at least.”
Luna didn’t answer or spare a glance at ‘Feather duster’s’ comment. She continued fiddling with the mystery object.
“Got it!”
The mystery item finally gave in to Luna’s carful tugs. It unraveled into a sort of a bag thing. It was dark blue with three lighter blue straps, two of which were smaller and close together, whilst the third was much larger.
Putting a foreleg in each small strap, she used her magic to pull the bag thing up them till they were up to her barrel. She then put her head through the much larger strap, making sure not to get her flowing starry mane trapped in it and then pulled it around her neck.
“There.” She said happily, “Now, is my little star ready to have a day trip into the city with mommy?”
Oh, crap! It’s a baby carrier.
Luna’s magic surrounded me, but I made an attempt to grab the bedsheets to stop her from putting me in that accursed thing!
This was all in vain, as I was dragged to the pouch of doom.
I was also shouting the most natural response to this situation.
“NEIN, NEIN, NEIN, NEIN, NEIN!”
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Well, this has given me a lot to think about.
I’m starting to think saying ‘no’ in German is one of those things. As well as find a way OUT of this stupid baby carrier, and the rest I haven’t figured out yet.
In the meantime, Luna is walking with me in the pouch and flanked by a couple of white Pegasus guards in golden ancient Greek rip-off armour. We're walking down the streets of their fancy capital city called Canterlot (something tells me that all the towns and cities here have horse pun names).
She had told me that we were going to a toy shop, and a bed shop. But first we were going to a doughnut shop called Doughnut Joe's. At least, there was something in this world that at least sounded normal, but I’m probably going to have that thrown back in my face. So I’m not getting my hopes up.
*shop bell ting-a-ling*
“Guards, Moonlight and I are going to spend some mother and daughter time.” Said Luna as she looked over at them, “So you may take a break.”
“Yes, Your Majesty.” They said in unison.
They trotted up the serving counter to presumably order something from the unicorn standing behind the said counter.
“Now then honey. What would you like?” she trotted to a menu that hung over the counter, like in McDonald's, Burger King or even Coaster. “They have ringed doughnuts, ringed doughnuts with chocolate sprinkles, custard doughnut and…”
The list went on and on.
But something was getting to me. Everypony we passed in the streets were bowing, which I can understand, Luna being a royalty and all. But the point is, I think some of them were directed to me after they bowed to Luna and congratulated her and wished her and her ‘child’ the best.
I don’t get it. They don’t even know me, let alone that Luna has adopted me, Who the hell spread the word around, and how did they do it so fast?
I felt a nuzzle on the top of my head. Looking up I saw Luna looking down at me, her eyes meeting my own.
“Anything takes your fancy?” she asked, “Or do you still need time to think?”
“Umm.”
I quickly scanned the menu.
Well, I’m not really big fan of doughnuts so… maybe just a simple chocolate ring one will do.
“Just a chocolate one, please.”
“Why, certainly, dear.”
Luna turned to the light creamy stallion with a brown mane, emerald green eyes and a picture or doughnut ring with pink icing on his flanks.
I didn’t listen to Luna giving the order to him. I have to plan an escape from this mare, and then find a way home.
But first things first… I’ve got to get out of this blasted carrier!
Maybe if I can convince her that I want to play in a park, or something like that, then I could make a brake for it?
‘So, you’re just going to up and leave our new mother?’
She is not… WHOA!
I hadn’t noticed that Luna already received the order. But either that’s her version of ‘a’ doughnut is different to most, or this is her giving me a treat.
Because floating just few inches in front of me was a plate of at least TWENTY of the chocolate ringed things.
My stomach chose that point to let out a loud growl.
Wait, when was the last time I ate? I didn’t get a chance to find breakfast yesterday, so…
I haven’t eaten ANYTHING for twenty-four hours!
A soft chuckle sounded from above me. Looking up, I saw it was Luna who was the source of it.
“Well, sounds like somepony’s hungry.” She said, trotting over to a table and sitting down at a table in a corner (I didn’t think ponies could sit. But, hey, I didn’t design this world). “Now, help yourself, darling.”
Don’t have to tell me twice.
Leaning as far as I could out of the pouch, I somehow managed to grab one of the closer doughnuts with my small hooves, and bring it to me, taking a small test bite out of it.
DAMN, this is GOOD!
After that one test bite, I started to devour the rest of the ring dough. Looking up, I saw the rest just waiting there on the plate.
And I just couldn’t resist.
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Luna was almost pulled face first into the plate as Moonlight lunged forward in the pouch and started to devour as many of the doughy treats as she could.
Chuckling at her daughter's actions, she picked up one of the doughnuts that had been knocked off the plate, in her aura. Only to drop it when Moonlight lunged forward for the second time.
Luna gritted her teeth as the carrier’s neck strap dug into the back of her neck.
“Sweetheart, not so fast! You’ll make yourself si-”
Then she remembered what her child had told her, Celestia and Twilight about what those monsters did in that terrible castle and camps. She remembered when she first held Moonlight, and had noticed how thin she was.
Luna felt a lump form in her throat.
Who knows when she last had ANYTHING to eat? And it must only be because of her Alicorn immortality that she didn’t starve to… to… death.
My poor baby girl.
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(A short fifteen minutes later)
Urgh… I ate too much, but it was so worth it.
I leant back in the carrier and rested my head against Luna’s barrel with crummy smile on my face. Both my forelegs were wrapped around my slightly distended stomach.
Actually, it was more of a small pudge.
Well, that comes from eating two-thirds of twenty chocolate ringed doughnuts.
What? We all sometimes pig out. Especially if you haven’t eaten for twenty-four hours.
“Well, somepony was definitely hungry.” Said Luna, as she smiled down at me. Which then turned into a slightly sad, “Especially after what you’ve been through!”
I give up. If I ever get back home, I’m giving up on ‘Old Blood’ and going back to ‘New Order’ (which I personally prefer).
*shop door bell ringing*
*hoofsteps approach*
“Hello, Auntie Luna.” Said a soft voice. But I was too busy being in a sort of stupor to pay attention to what was going on.
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Luna turned around to face the newcomer. Who was a light pink Alicorn slightly shorter than her, purple tipped feathers on her wings, a flowing mane and multi-coloured (dark purple, pink-purple and creamy), purple eyes and a crystal heart with a golden gild on each side cutie mark.
“Good morning, Cadence, how are you?” She said turning to face the Princess of love fully.
Cadence eyed the foal carrier Luna was wearing. Or more it’s occupant than the carrier itself.
“So, it’s true.” She said in amazement. “A natural ‘born’ Alicorn!”
Luna was wearing an extremely proud face at what she was going to say next.
“Yes! This is my child-”
*BBBBBUUUUURRRRRPPPPP!*
Cadence looked back up at Luna’s rather sheepish expression with a raised eyebrow.
“Who you have clearly overfed!”
“Well… maybe."
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Well you have made a big improvements on you spelling Roman that is for sure. For what I can see Luna seem to have no real concept of what it is to be a mother, how she might think that it is more to play than actually raised her/him and might actually be treating Alex as more of a pet rather then an actual daughter, and has not yet realized all the responsibility that is involves in the role. In this situation, I think that it might be better for Alex to be under the care of somepony more responsible that can better assume the role of parents, and gives the front of royalty, and who is, my best guess would be Shining Armor and Cadance at worst I think that Twilight Sparkle parents,being close by, might be of big help on the situation, having raised to foal who are prominent figures in Equestrial and they are relatively close. What I would worry is Alex capable of taking the intense pressure of being in the public eye and to be groomed into the position of princess, being contently criticizes, failures would bring harsh reprimand him/her.
great chapter, I can see the foal like tendencies starting to coming in with out him noticing. Nice cliff hanger too.
Honestly I´m not sure if I remember which one he had, since I had read about at least four different problems in fanfictions in the last few weeks, but I´m usually pretty interessted in that stuff.
Not sure what I would like to see at the moment, but It is somehow really funny to see Luna thinking she would have a sad past, and he just trying to escape, or trying to enjoy his time there. I expected Cadance somehow to freak out about Luna having a child, and being really excited, but there is still time. Not sure which personality, or skills she has in your fanfiction, and with that I mean, if she maybe can see how much Luna, and the child trust each other at the moment or not.
Long story short, I can´t wait for the next chapter, I noticed I´m a bit more eager to read this story, than some other stuff at the moment.
6513181 Well this is based off of Child in Me and though she may not have the experience Luna honestly wants to be a mother. Heck in that one Luna litteraly stops a train with brute force to find her child.
Hasn't reach the hilarity of Child in me yet but getting there.
Glorious!
Just an advice. If you want to use more German, especially a sentence, don't use Google Translator. If you want to use more German you best ask someone who can speak it fluently. I would help for an example, since I can speak it. Just saying it because I have read a quite some stories lately where the Author 'attempted' to use German and failed with the Google Translator.
Where isn't a human-turned-foal-and-get-adopted-by-Cadence story out there, is there? Someone should make that happen!
LOVED THIS CHAPTER I DID
LOL
6552462 Oh, there is... Trust me on this; I'm still waiting on an update from it...
7183770 I'd like to read that. What's it called?
7414119 Of Boredom and Co-Conspirators; it's a fun little story so far, and it's been confirmed that the next chapter is coming around December, due to computer issues...
Wow I was not expecting that to happen in the dream realm. Can't someone just use a memory looking spell?
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I would've done a Dr strange dream
Luna would’ve been horrified at my dream:
A nightmare where i’m being pursued by a Thing-esque monster through a ruined building.
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Funny, I had the same dream but in reverse. I was pursuing the monster.
Oh this parts made me cry
The purple one did it, and when she is excited she can accomplish feats that would make the Pink One proud