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Please make this multiple chapters. Please man, I'll do anything.
6395784 I'm giving it a day or so to breathe before I work on more. Glad you've enjoyed it. Again, it's my first attempt at this sort of thing, and a positive response is all I ever want from my work.
I'll just say this: Spike's got a fun week ahead of him.
Continuing this story would be much appreciated!
Spike is the lamest character ever.
6396196 >can't tell if talking about my 3 a.m. one hour story or actual TV show
This story definitely needs more chapters. It's exceptionally well set up and enjoyable, and everything about it on the physical side is reasonable, which is a rare plus for such stories.
Also, I hope for contrast's sake, you make Luna's skin moon pale.
6396244 Yeah, it never made sense to me when people depicted her as darker toned than Celestia. You don't need to worry about that.
6395784 Oh dear god that pic on this story.
good start, I have a good feeling for this fic
Can we have Cadence in this story as well?
6396673 No promises, but maybe. I'll see if it works.
not bad good have used more build up and some more descriptive words here and there as Celstia seemed to telaport for here to there
6396901 Yeah, I've noticed that on a reread. This chapter was written in one sitting at an ungodly hour, and I was exhausted, so it's not my best work. The next few chapters will be done with more prep work and care, and the first chapter will be revised and repaired.
Congrats on the feature!
6396255 actually, it does make sense. The moon is darker than tar. It only seems white because of the amount of sunlight it gets directly. No matter how black something may be, illuminate it enough and it will seem to be a white mirror. Look up albedo, it will explain it better.
Now onwards to reading!!
6397515 Gotta say, that's a cool thing to wake up to. My first smut fic and it gets a feature. I just hope it doesn't go to my head and I keep putting out content that's at least as good as this chapter. Honestly I still don't know how this happened
I certainly enjoy that the premise of this is that Spike is getting some recognition for his work to the Crown even though it seems like most of it is thankless work. And I have to love that they way you are kinda describing Tia (+1 for the loss of formality BTW--Spike's on first-name-basis with the Princeses), you are also adding that she's touched with her sunrays, probably implying that she's a bit tanned (I bet she's one of those that knows and enjoys sunbathing in the nude--no tan lines whatsoever
) Also enjoying that she's got at least D-cups; as much as I love Celestia with a nice rack, there has to be a point where it's plausible, and seeing her with like F and above is excessive.
Her flirty personality really suits her as well--she knows she's got it going on, but at the same time she's not trying to thrust (heh heh, thrust
) that into Spike's face. And Spike, you've deserved it; it's time to finally let yourself go a little. The Princess of the Sun is doing the same thing, how about you?
I assume that Lulu is a bit of a opposite to Celestia though. While Tia is all out there making it obvious she likes Spike a lot, I just get that Lulu is a bit of a tsundere. It's probably because of her status as the Princess of the Night, but Lulu is a woman just like Tia is at heart, and maybe it takes a kindred soul (in this case Spike) to go from the 'tsun tsun' part to the 'dere dere' form that very few people other than Tia are witnessed to experience.
Looking forward to the new chapters!!! :D
--- DanvilleBengal
Yes it is.
Why pineapples?
6398967 Makes jizz sweeter
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Kind of a mature subject. One of my real life friends asked the same thing. I told him, and his face was priceless by the end. He responded by eating the rest of pineapple platter given to him after that.
In short, this: https://porkandgin.com/ingredients/the-pineapple-sex-test/
Do I even need to put a caution label on something that's in a comment section of a mature story?
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6399032 That's just gross.
Was going to read this. Then I saw the human tag. Now I don't know if I want to.....
6399743 well he's 18 and she's kind of eternal. So it's legal, if that's the problem
6400011 No it's not that. I don't care that there not ponies, so don't take it that way. It's Spike not being a dragon. I would just read the story and mentally replace the details of his humanity with more dragon like ones. But I feel that takes away the point of reading the story you wrote. A perversion of it, if you will. I might still read it. Probably tomorrow. For now, i shall put it in my read later library. I just prefer Dragon Spike over Human Spike.
6400058 An understandable preference. This had been written as a one shot (lol) since I'm new to the sexual content scene, so it wasn't written with much thought toward the dragon aspects of Spike's character, which don't come through in his personality in this chapter. The later chapters will show a change in this, but he doesn't have any dragon-like physical attributes in the story.
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Well this should be fun. Have to ask though, what's with the increase in humanized, Spike, stories?! I like some of them, but I just can't see the reason for so many.
Pretty cool, I need more.
6409771 More should show up by morning.
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Hmm, I'll make this quick.
Come on man, it's been a week. I need mah fix, bro
6438927 Working REALLY hard (lol) on the next chapter, trying to make it the best I can. It's coming along. Shouldn't be more than another few days
PLEASE MAKE A NEW CHAPTER I'M BEGGING YOU!
6466226 Another few days he says.
It's been 5 weeks mon ami.
6566475 Been working on it. Dealing with a bit of an illness at the moment and it's slowing me down. But it's still happening.
6582129 Glad to hear that, I am LOVING this story.
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Why is she asking him to eat pineapples ?
6612684 Pineapples sweeten semen.
6612684 They sweeten jizz
So... What's the update?
Weres the update
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7005794 Sorry about that. It's an error on my end. New chapter by morning.
7006549 Please sir/madam, can we have some more?
7301112 The answer to that question is yes. I've had some medical issues keeping me from doing any real work on this lately, but I'm doing an outline for where I want this to go. There shall be more. I want to be 'Crystal' clear about that. I have Lovely plans.
7301221 Medical issues? How are you feeling? You didn't have to get something replaced, did you?
7301302 Nothing that bad, but I've had an ulcer in my esophagus, and the medication to heal it causes high anxiety, so I've been having anxiety attacks for about three months almost daily that make it feel like I'm about to have a heart attack. It also doesn't help that I have to stay on this medication for another four months or so.
Pretty good work here, I think we'd all appreciate another chapter!
plz continue!
to bad
more great potential unfinished