I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
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What's the difference between soft brainwashing and hard brainwashing?
6393558 Soft brainwashing is something innocent, as in you make them do something that they are aware of but would have no problems doing anyway.
Hard brainwashing would be re-writing a pony's mind altogether, wiping out their old self and creating something new for your own twisted enjoyment.
See why I went for the first?
6394472 no.
6394568 No? As in I'm wrong or no you're not into that?
6394581 That was my attempt at humor. Anyway, what i ment by that comment is that, in these kind of stories, I like that "hard" brainwashing, and by that "no" I meant that I don't understand why you didn't write it, but I do understand it, I was just joking.
6394588 Oh right, sorry I miss understood. XD
And I like the idea of a victim being slightly altered in the mind to return willingly and knowingly and liking it, makes it more fun. :) At least, for me everyone has their own cup of tea.
Man I am super British! XD
6394472 yes.
Ooh, I hope lamiadash will become a thing in the main story. That'd be interesting.
It's never enough
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6394930 That's what everyone says! XD
6394913 Bolt might return and find the whole mane six looking like lamais and be like
"What the hell have you been doing!?" Turns to Ruby "Did you do this?"
"What? How could I do... Well... This... Wait... Can this work on Bolt?"
"NOOO!"
XD
I enjoyed the story greatly.
The point where Rainbows mind was turning more predatory and instinctive was fun, also the induction intent to make her return, very clever on rainbows part :3
I don't think i would change anything but seeing more of the lamia potion in the main adventure would be fun.
Thank you so much for taking your time to write this ^^ i bet Twiggy loved it too ;3
6406948 Glad you liked it. :)
And if Twiggy didn't have fun the first time she'll come to love it the next hundred or so times. :P
6407347 hundreds? O.o
Does that mean that Rainbow is gonna be stuck as a lamia for 100 moons to come?
Ps. Twiggy loves it already o.o
6407514 XD It's likely Rainbow will be stuck like this for at least three to six months, so... Yeah, roughly 100 days minimal, have fun. :3
Honestly, I kind of wish there was a sequel to this that was also a side story to Spirals and Spices that had an encounter between lamia-Dash and Ruby.
Or was that a scene in S&S that came out shortly after this story was made?
EDIT: Now that I've skimmed through the last few chapters of S&S, I realize that's not possible. However, I'd love to see a side story that takes place just after this where lamia-RD hypnotizes AJ to get back at her for her part in the events that had taken prior to this story.
7997570 I suppose I can do that, AJ hasn't been sub yet and Rainbow has a tendency to be grudgy. :3
7998756 Yeah, she does.
Can't wait for it
Hm
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Hm?
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Its a... misplaced story.
First, Pinkie should have known better than to give a full bottle of something that had a one teaspoon dosage to Rainbow without warning.
Second, was Rainbow actually in control of herself here? I did see a "sex" warning, but I did not see a "rape" warning.
Third ... Rainbow gave her prey a "return here for more" suggestion, and after recovering decided to go to Ponyville and move in with the Cakes and Pinkie. I'm assuming that post hypnotic suggestion will wear off, but I'm really curious how Twilight will respond to this behavior back in town.