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GeodesicDragon


I'm a Scotsman who likes to write stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. (Discord Server)

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When the other Elements of Harmony realise that Fluttershy gave each of them a different reason for not attending a slumber party, they set out to discover the truth.

They end up discovering something else instead.

AUTHOR'S NOTES: This story was inspired by a blog post that Obselescence wrote — although I should point out that it has absolutely nothing to do with the idea he suggested (hence the lack of a 'Romance' tag).

Rated T for innuendo.

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Comments ( 12 )

That ending though. Love it!

Great work portraying all the characters so well!

:pinkiegasp:

:flutterrage: Do it!

:moustache::raritywink:?

:facehoof:

So, I saw the name and thought that it was a vague reference to Shia Labeouf. I don't know if I'm disappointed or not that it doesn't appear to be that way...

Soooo fun! Really awesome writing and a great story too. Got to love Flutters. You did a masterful job with the Mane 6 dialogue. That's hard to do! :pinkiehappy:

6393998 I just realised that it sounded like Shia Labeouf.

6393998

As well as the actual story, the title was also inspired by Obselescence's blog post.

Shy a la Buff > Shy And The Bluff > Shia Labeouf

:pinkiehappy:
now this is a good one I never even guessed that one good job GD.
Harts Fire

Pinkie stopped walking and turned around. "You're all forgetting the most important thing of all!" she gasped.

Rainbow Dash raised an eyebrow at her. "And that is...?"

Pinkie grinned. "We totally need to ship those two."

Bad Pinkie, bad! A thousand "Lauren Faust"s for you!

this ship............it needs to set sail, with a flotilla of supporters surrounding it

Wow, just wow. I thought this was going to be some sort of cannibalism thing because the title sounds like Shia Labeouf.
A couple little mistakes I spotted

then lay on his back and grabbed the dumbbell he had been lifting

caused Bulk Biceps to drop the dumbbell he was holding

Unless the picture is wrong, dumbbell should be barbell. Dumbbell is single hand (hoof?) Like his cutie mark, barbell is two hand (hoof?) Like what he was actually lifting.

I've never thought of this ship before, not a bad ship.

(Now to go check out the blog post that inspired this.)

Shipping?
...
I HATH BEEN SUMMONED,

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