I found myself in a strange place surrounded by creatures I've never seen or heard of before. I have a new pair of wings and a horn that I have absolutely no idea how to use. And who is this mare? Will I be able to find a way back home or will I try to make a life here?
Retelling of Equestrian history. Hearth's Warming Eve never happened.
Just a thought I had in my head for the longest time. So, I'm prepared to take all the hate that comes with this. But, if you like it, don't be afraid to leave a comment.
Shameless self insert and Alicorn OC. I get that Alicorn OCs get really bad rep but I'll try to not make it so bad.
Tags will change as they appear. Sit back and enjoy the show.
Chapters (4)
Omg this is awesome, i can't wait to read more
I will be keeping my eye on this story as it progresses. It looks decent for a beginning, if a bit of a blank slate opening. We know nothing of our hero's personality except that he is confused and instead of showing that he likes to write within story, we are told. Not bad but not good, as you had a narrative purpose for bringing it up. Again, I will be watching this carefully. You are on notice.
6411330 I didn't think it would be that good. A random piece of headcanon history of Equestria. I'm also slightly unsure how to proceed. But I'll be writing more definitely. Thanks for the comment anyway, Derps.
6411490 I tried something different for my stories this time. So this is an experiment to see if it works. The Olde English speak might be gone in a few chapters. But I'm really glad that you enjoyed my humble beginning.
Again. Sorry this took so long. Work and everything going on in my life got in the way.
There are one inconsistency that I've noticed in here. From the last chapter, there's this paragraph:
And in this chapter:
Was that intentional for him to hide his origin (at least in public)? If so, then I'll retract my earlier statement.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I haven't read that first chapter in years. But since you pointed that out, I believe I had originally planned that only the elder, aura and garnet would know of his human origins.
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Ah, I see. Thanks for clarifying that out.