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Just another guy trying to make his mark.


Las Vegas.

A city of lies, corruption, and murder...all hidden beneath a facade of pretty lights.

Allen wants to escape it all, to run away from his past mistakes and take back a life he so foolishly threw away four years ago. Fate, however, had other plans for him.

On the night of a simple hit-and-run assassination job, he ends up saving a complete stranger from certain death. The following morning, he discovers that she traveled to Vegas from a completely different universe, and that the portal that brought her here will be closed for quite some time. To make matters worse, Allen isn't the only one that knows she's here.

As he fights to protect this strange girl from a city bent on killing her, her inquisitive nature will force him to face his demons and make a choice.

Will he be able to forgive himself? Or will he succumb to the weight of his past?

Sex tag for suggestive themes.

Chapters (33)
Comments ( 155 )

i like where this is going:pinkiehappy:

6383047 I don't like wasting time, so I got straight into the action. :rainbowdetermined2:

6383409 I can see that. XD good nontheless:pinkiehappy:

Nice chapter bro. I have a question.

it's bad that I want to know where it's going to appear another character and don't wanna know at the same time?

The waitting is killing me ! XD. Anyways, I like very much where this is going . I wonder how twilight will react when she wakes up.:twilightsmile:

6425778 One: Hey you're back!
Two: No, it's not bad at all!
Three: Regarding Twilight, I'll say it's going to be...interesting.

6427753 what are you even talking about? I was here the whole time. But not the interent tho. It was supposed to be a earlier comment before the other one but something happened... :applejackunsure:

Either way, I want to see moar!

Nice chapter. I have a doubt tho. Who's moondancer?

Nice chapter. Im eager to read the rest. Keep goinh lIke this. :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

6459289 you see amending fences yet? With twilights "other" friends?

6460244 amending fences? What does that means? Sorry for asking anyways... I didn't got the point...

6461400 one of the newer mlp episodes.
In any case, at this point they're still best friends.

6461926 ah... no... actually, still haven't seen any season 5 episode... :ajsleepy::twilightoops:

Yep, I like what I is reading. BTW ,what's OCD? Something about smartness or something like that?

6468534 Obsessive compulsive disorder. In Twilights case she obsessively compulsively takes notes. Remember her checklists of her checklists? :twilightsheepish:

6469045 ooooooohhhhhhgh :pinkiecrazy: yep.

By the way favorite part is everything so far:pinkiehappy:

6499025 moar is coming. In the meantime avatar idea: fluffle puff eating a taco

Nice car...certainly nicer than today's vehicles. I like vintage cars a lot better so don't throw a fit, someone is bound to do it.

6500020 Personally I don't mind the 2015 Mustang, but the Mach 1 is still my favorite.

You should make it so that the admin tells him he can't leave anymore after the assassination or maybe the 3 guys looking for him see him assassinate the mayor

6513563 There will be a twist, I can promise that. But it won't be Admin and I have other plans for the thugs.

6514498 sorry for not reading the new chapters, tablet its kinda busted and i cant read for now. luckily, i can read them by my moms laptop. wait for further comments after this one :derpytongue2:

Comment posted by Sheriff deleted Oct 15th, 2015

6527527 Hey no sweat bro! Sorry about the tablet, that's gotta suck.:applejackunsure:

6527527 Also did you make your avatar yourself? If so what program did you use?

good evening gentlemen asskicking one liner confirmed

6530683 I do try friend. Welcome to the party. :moustache:

6530644 I used ponycreator and kinda modified it and a guy drew it for me so. :)

6530835 oh. And nice chapter. Kinda funny how they though they were "hiding" three cars back while Allen saw them easily.

You never disappoint . Once again you did a good job *clap* *clap* *clap*

6550826 (Takes a bow) Thank you, thank you! You're too kind! Really!
Also, what do you think of my artwork?

Comment posted by Sheriff deleted Oct 21st, 2015

6550880 My page aint no place for h8rs. Thanks buddy. Seriously though: Fluffle. Taco. Funny.:pinkiehappy:

oh boy this just got hellish complicated and good. Bring in the OP teleporting Twilight trick after he gets cuaght for killing the mayor, and explain to the Irrate Unicorn why he killed the mayor in cold blood.

6572780 I promise Dr. D: Twilight will find out, Twilight will be pissed.

First, though, hes gotta make it out alive.

6577174 I have no idea what that is, but I will now google it.:derpytongue2:

6577174 Yeah, no. Does look like a cool game though.

All i hear from Skeeter is Catch a ride!!!!!

6579381 I was waiting for someone to catch that reference.:pinkiehappy:

6579960 1-Moar is coming! Calm down!:applejackconfused:
2-Thank you.:twilightsmile:
3-Did I make that reference too obvious? Ah, screw it.

The part the your not taking me without a fight gave it away

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