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Give me an eternity, I'll give you an update!


On her deathbed, Sunset Shimmer looks back on her accomplishments, and realizes how she will be remembered.

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Okay I laughed when I read that ending. I love things like this.


Well! That ending though! Somehow, I knew it was coming.

Have a fav and a thumbs up.

Starswirl was kind of negligent fool wasn't he?

Jesus, that ending is quite tonally disonant.

I was sad, and then I was both really sad and struggling to contain laughter.

I love everything. But the end part is....

I'm not one for sad stories, but I had to read this just because I knew I had a perfect song to read it with -- also, that ending! :rainbowlaugh:

Well, I'm not going to say that the ending was what I expected. But it made me giggle in a dark humor kind of way, which was the point of it - so job well done.

The author's note really seals it, here

fav'd for the author note

I'm laughing my ass off rn

Dammit Rainbow... :trollestia:

Even though I'm still not a big fan of EqG, you did a awesome job on this story. It engrossed me so much that I didn't see the ending going and it blew me away with laughter. Keep up the good work, my man. :pinkiehappy:

The police caught me making sweet sweet love to that nanny only once, but it is all anypony ever remembers about me.

I was sad reading it, but man that ending. Didn't know whether to laugh with the sad.

Fillies and Gentlecolts: Miss Rainbow Dash: Mood Assassin, :facehoof:

Knowing Rainbow Dash, I should've seen that coming:rainbowlaugh:.


Fuck you, Rainbow. We're always going to remember the time you sang that awful song upstaging all your friends and nearly dooming the world.

The ultimate rainbow troll. ╰( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )つ──☆*:・゚

Well, Dashie. Thanks for the reminder why I rank you even lower than Pinkie Pie. *Punches*

That mood whiplash, man. :D

Loved it all but buck you rainbow

.........Well, that was um, a tad depressing. Something I always find a little hard to think about is characters in cartoons getting older. I mean we age and such, but cartoons can often stay as young as we want them to, so it kind of is shocking to see them suddenly be so old and frail.

Was surprised by the descriptions of the mane 6, especially Rainbow being in a wheelchair, though I suppose given how reckless she is that sort of thing was bound to happen eventually.

Overall not a bad story, though I have to admit the ending felt like kind of a really uneeded joke. I admit its in character for Rainbow but I'm pretty sure she'd save that little crack for a couple of days or weeks after Sunset dies, not on her death bed. Yeah it's in character but still, Element of Loyalty and all that stuff, but still nice story overall. Though you might want to tag this under "humor" as well for that little crack, just saying.


Nicely done.

It's always that one goat. No matter what, everything funnels back to that one goat.

Sunset Shimmer's life in a nutshell.

That moral is sooo true.

fair warning my only thoughts were "how many kids did she have?"

Man when you read this masterpiece while listening to this:

If not good enough, then this?

God damn. That ending was like you shooting Bambi's mum, then wearing her skin and hopping after her traumatized son and other forest critters in all your twisted delight. You are so messed up, and I love you for it. Just one sentence and I felt so horrible, awesome job!

Nice ending.
Would you like to kill someone else now?

Man you should've put the comedy tag lol.

This story was so beautfiul and touching...and then that ending ruined it. Good grief. :facehoof:

Rainbow Dash, you dolt!:facehoof:

I know you were trying to build us up for a laugh at the end, but all I could think was "wow, Rainbow Dash is a dick, and this is not something friends and family would talk about on someone's deathbed".

Am I the only one who thinks that Sunset died just because of that joke?

"Ugh, Rainbow Dash, you still can't let me live it down? Screw this, I don't want to listen. I'd better pass away."

Yeah, I laughed... But to be fair, I was expecting something like that.

And it has been repeated and frequently established that I am a terrible person. (For a very loose definition of the word "person.")

I laughed too.

I won't lie - I laughed at that stinger. Even though it made the story more cruel than depressing.

F'king Rainbow Douche. Even in fanworks she's getting to be insufferable.

*Facepalm/hoof.* Damnit, Rainbow.

"Fuck it, I'm done." *flatlines*

You... You... YOU SUNUVA-!

... Ugh... Ok, that was good, but still, all those feels and then... urgh!

I was wondering how this story was comedy, or dark. I was kind of getting a little bored towards the end, waiting for the funny.

And then it hit me. Got a belly-laugh out of me, that one.

How will Rainbow Dash be remembered?

FUCKIN WOW! I think you're the first to get me to hate Rainbow Dash! :twilightangry2:

if sunset where real and she saw what you all wrote about her well take a gander on what the reaction would be?

No-one ever worked out why Sunset died with such a broad grin on her face, as if someone had said something to her that she found very, very funny for some reason.

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