She doesn't need words to speak. She doesn't need words to understand. A deeper connection lies between them. They have something greater than words. A bond forged over the course of only a day, but it will e the most important day of both their lives.
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This sounds very interesting.
That was very interesting indeed.
I enjoyed it, it feels brief but well laid out.
This was briliant!
Short but not rushed. A complet and beautiful story.
6395066 Thanks! I had the idea for a while and just had to get it out. Glad you liked it
that was a wonderful story, though the title reminds me of the song Sound of Silence by Simon and Garfunkel, but the story its self was a little more uplifting than that. great work.
A fashionably short story with good emotional depth and surprising information density without being overwhelming. Nice job.
Your review with the PCaRG is up!
Good sir, I do believe you've forgotten the 'Sad' or possibly 'tragedy' tags, as this story is certainly both. Nevertheless it is an amazing story, I only wish it had a sequel.
7448062 It is entirely possible I did forget a tag. As for the other thing, the sequel, I don't know. I'll think on it for sure
You have my attention!
And nice reference with the story name
Well, a little fast, but Nicly done!
Nice. Very short, but not rushed.
Big of a.....disappointing ending there. Maybe it's just me, but it felt.....cut off. Unfulfilled. One more chapter/sequel to wrap everything up.
7448427 isn't what Octavias mom doing considered kidnapping? I mean if Octavia is considered an adult then isn't forcing her to go somewhere against her own will considered kidnapping? I guess I'm going to have to read the sequel and find out for myself!
It was rather good if not a bit short
Huh. Well...this looks to be a much darker take on Vinyl's character than I've seen before...I mean, from this chapter alone, she appears to be mute, homeless, and penniless. This story appears to be missing a tag...I'll read on, though.
Hopefully it is not just Vinyl making Octavia act like she did. I mean,
The hotel has certain standards?! Are you absolutely sh***ing me right now?! I mean, this is a preferred customer, as is noted by her family always having a suite available, and this jackwagon is saying no to her just because of a guest that she brought in?! Assuming Octavia is as rich as it appears that she is, she could very easily get that pony fired. AND SHE SHOULD. F*** that pony, and F*** that pony's entire family. THAT DESKPONY DOESN'T DESERVE TO LIVE.
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Calm down, man!
Top 10 fic of all time