When the Elements of Harmony destroyed Nightmare Moon, they took something from Luna as well. There's only one thing Twilight can do. And Sunset deeply regrets it.
Random idea I had. Sequels may exist in the future.
Cover art by me.
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I have to question why Sunset was there. It didn't feel like she was contributing anything to the story.
It also didn't feel like her presence was necessary for the spell to be completed or at least you didn't allude to such. It doesn't seem as though she'd have a place in any sequels either.
6371992 In all honesty, Sunset was there because
ILuna wanted her to be. And it gave Twi a reason to panic.This is awesome imma share it
6374648 Thanks! You made me smile.
It's a bit rough around the edges, but I WANT SEQUEL!
Come to think of it, this could actually turn into a long story following the daily life of Stardust and the resulting repercussions.
6374956 I agree, this isn't one of the best things I've ever written. But maybe there will be a sequel. We will have to see.
I like it!
Sad, but has the promise of a great sequel
6397697 I'm still thinking on it, but I have some ideas.
This story needs to be shared