Overall: This is my first fic, be gentle, etc, etc. Original prompts and stuff are here.
I would appreciate any and all constructive criticism of my works - even the smallest grammatical error.
I know that some of them seem rushed, especially the titles(which were a last minute ish thing, I'll have to think of better ones).
something something lauren faust copyright hasbro
Pressure
Prompt: The Mane 6 go out for their first night of drinking together.
The metaphor was too dense in my opinion, but I was really constricted by the short length of it - I'm sure I could have spread it out over a longer fic.
I had fun working out fanon about how pegasus magic allows them to fly.
And no, you guys don't get a FlutterDash makeout scene, irregardless of how much you beg.
Chrysalis' Break
Prompt: Prequel to A Canterlot Wedding written from either Chrysalis or Cadence's Point of view.
This one was interesting. I can't shake a nagging feeling that it was too telly, but eh. I don't see much room for expansion in the scene itself, except for maybe some details(or inserting a fight scene or something). Eh.
Forgiveness
Prompt: Do one about Luna saving/comforting/etc. Celestia after the sun princess overworks herself from raising the sun and the moon for so long on top of dealing with Luna's return.
You can tell that I love page breaks and parallelism. I expanded on the tickling fight on request of the original prompter; plenty of room to possibly parallel the development of Luna's and Celestia's feelings.
Equestria Noir
Prompt: Twilight investigating the disappearance of Rarity. In a dark private investigator sort of way.
Oh dear. A genre I'm not good at. I tried my best at first, but Noir doesn't fit my voice - so I wrote what did fit my voice - subversion.
Rainbow Dash and the MacGuffin
Prompt: Rainbow Dash and Applejack as privateers. At some point, the Loch Ness monster is mentioned. Zecora, the CMC, and Pip make an appearance as a pirate crew.
I'm as familiar with the pirate genre as I am with the Noir genre - so I decided to take this on a tangent
There is a thin line between stupid and satire; a line that only a wise author can avoid. I am a clever author. Can't say anything about the wise part. Might have gone over the top at some points, but isn't that the point of it?
shrug
How You Met My Mother
Prompt: How about Twilight trying to figure out how she spontaneously combusted on that one episode with the Pinkie Sense?
oh god this went absurd really, really fast - second person and talkative narrator and shipping two metaphysical concepts
Also, no page breaks!
Boone In Equestria
Prompt: Send Craig Boone to Equestria as a unicron, and Celestia recruits him to fight slaving Griffin tribe. Boone x Celestia OTP!
i was sleep deprived so i made less subtle trollfic than macguffin. i'm not sure if it even has jkokes
god i need sleep
Umm... a prompt...
How about Twilight trying to figure out how she spontaneously combusted on that one episode with the Pinkie Sense?
Other than that, I'll be sure to give these stories a read through.
What if the mane six were all cats, and they lived in Kittieville and all the pony puns were cat puns? That fic would be purr-fect!
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Unfortunately I'm not that punny
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All right, hmm... I just thought of who's perspective to write it from...
What about one where Fluttershy gets locked out of her house and as a result gets involved in some zany events? Sort of a "Dude, Where's My Car?" but with ponies. Like, she gave Pinkie Pie her spare key, but Pinkie Pie can't remember where she left it, and so on...
Send Craig Boone to Equestria as a unicron, and Celestia recruits him to fight slaving Griffin tribe. Boone x Celestia OTP!
If you want a serious prompt, have a story where young Twilight has a goldfish and it dies, and then Celestia has to explain mortality to Twilight.\, and explain why she's different from everypony else.
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Hmm... The serious prompt sounds like a great way to sharpen up my dialogue. Added to my rapidly growing queue.
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But her cottage doesn't have a lock :c
Oh well, more lamp stands!
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What are you talking about? She had it thoroughly locked down in "Putting Your Hoof Down"
Also, I bear more prompts, of varying seriousness:
* (Headfanon time!) Rainbow Dash learns that Fluttershy's dad used to be a Wonderbolt, and keeps perstering her about it. FLuttershy's meekness doesn't let Rainbow know she doesn't enjoy being thought of only as "[x]'s daughter", an eventually breaks down while explaining she has daddy dissapointment issues. Friendshipping ensures.
* A "what did I do last night" fic starring Celestia. Events transpired included promoting Twilight to Archmage, releasing and resealing Discord, inventing a new fashion trend, beating an ogre at a belching competition, winning rulership over a bordering nation with Blackjack, and drying her mane like Luna's.
* Twilight inventing firearms and subsequently discarding them since nopony with hooves can use them.
* Cadance finds out she's pregnant, and she and Shining have a heartwarming discusion on what kind of parents they'd be.
* Or, like above, Cadance is sick with worry when she doesn't know if the baby will be immortal like here (if she is immortal, that is)
* Something that opens with Celestia reading a a friendship report about confronting fears, and then the Typanophobic goddess running from her doctor who needs a blood sample.
* Celestia entering a Rocky-style training montage after her defeat by Chrysalis, and surprising everypony (who've by now dismissed her) by defeating Tirek all on her own.
...Just a few.
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Weren't those boards and not an actual lock? Eh. I'll go rewatch the episode.
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Done - written as How You Met My Mother. Please reply with your favorite wat image marco.