When two changelings decided to take a "captive", they learn fast why they were told to avoid him. Thankfully it isn't completely horrible. For the "captive" that is.
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Moonlit Path
People are not born equal. That's the hard truth I learned at age four. But that was my first and last setback. -Midoriya Izuku
Moonlit Path
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LOL!
... That was interesting.
You just know she secretly looks forward to his visits.
Could use a bit of editing. But still good.
Well... that happened
Love it!
Um... good idea, but riddled with various errors.
I couldn't read this, and had to stop about one-fourth of the way through. Please find a editor or pre-reader or something. This has so many holes, typos, and errors that it's headache-inducing.
Funny, but has a lot of grammatical errors.
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I edited it again, and had a friend look over it. If you guys notice anything that we missed I'd love to know. Thank you
Did Rarity faint cause Chrysalis was there or how she looked
The talking cutie mark was a good touch and funny
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and thank you
Well that was silly.
Could have used one more proofreading pass though.
That was cute!
I....I don't.....wow.....this....this gets an upvote.
It was messy,
I have reviewed this HERE.