Brutal Honesty

Applejack goes out to see her friends, and give them some advice. Just like any other day.

Thank you to Foals for prereading, and Ocean Stardust for editing.

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Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #1 · Aug 26th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I see that Applejack subscribes to the percussive maintenance method of helping Twilight.

Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #2 · Aug 26th, 2015 · · ·

This is why e all need friends......this is why friendship is Magic! Thanks for the reminder. You know, I rally needed it just now! Be well.

Cross Lament

Cross Lament #3 · Aug 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6361821 Mechanical impulse stress routine. Fixes malfunctioning machinery and malfunctioning mares with equal efficacy.

ShiningNova

ShiningNova #4 · Aug 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Wow this didn't have a sad tag so I didn't know what I was walking into. Muh feels breh Muh feels. I really liked the story though. It managed to tug really hard at my heartstrings.

It just goes to show Applejack is definitely best pony.

Penn Hooven

Penn Hooven #5 · Aug 27th, 2015 · 2 · ·

I'm not dumb, but I don't get it. I do get that AJ is having it rough keeping two of her friends together, but still, why are they going through such a hard time?

No, I think I get it now. It's rough having to be the one to keep things together for other people, when you feel like your about to fall apart yourself. Like you can fix others, albeit temporarily, but you can't fix yourself. Interesting.

Leoshi

Leoshi #6 · Aug 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Hm. This was not what I expected. You took me by surprise in the best way possible, and I typically don't like surprises. It's always interesting to see characters struggling with a problem already established, instead of seeing the problem begin or end. Leaves a lot for interpretation and the imagination. I also like how you portrayed Applejack. She's like the bedrock to her friends' lives, but even a rock can crack now and then.

Well done.

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