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LoneSurvivingWolf


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Scratch notices things beginning to shift when the Elements of Harmony begin gathering. Forces begin uniting, trying to stop the friends. Scratch however takes it upon herself to stop them before it is too late. But as the recognition for these good deeds goes to those who hold the elements, the group begins wondering if they should continue their deeds, or make their own group known.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

It's okay, for an introductory chapter. Great writing style and wonderful back story. Now the only thing left is just for us to get to the main plot. Don't rush yourself, you're doing fine!

34590 Why thank you! :pinkiesmile: I will definately write more! Thank you so much for your feedback :heart:

Shipping DJ PON3 and Big Mac? That's an interesting choice at least it isn't the way too common FlutterMac or TwiMac plus your writing style is great too and I look forward to more of this.

34839 Thank you! I find that most of my favorite ponies are the ones that have room to grow with who they are. (The background ponies or secondary characters) :eeyup:

I'm truly enjoying this story,:raritystarry: you're doing a great job on the backgrounds of how all the characters know one another and staying very accurate to the source material as well:yay:. Stuff like this makes me happy and want more:pinkiehappy:. I can't wait to see how you tie the rest of the story together Kitten:moustache:, keep it coming! :heart::rainbowkiss:

36978 Yay! :scootangel: I try my best because I know if I mess up somepony somewhere is going to rip me a new one for getting it wrong. :pinkiesad2: But yay! Thank you, I aim to please! :ajsmug: Will do hun, Will do! :heart:

This is a nice chapter. It's a strange pairing, but hey, at least it doesn't contradict with canon :scootangel:

So, are these three going to save help save Equestria from the sidelines or are there more? Oh well, the waiting shall continue!

41778 Well friend, I'm natorious for giving away things in my soties because when I write and put in the twists, I feel like I'm lying to my readers. :applecry: However, For suspence, I must leave you hanging. :pinkiesad2: My appologies! But I hope you'll enjoy the twisty ride :rainbowdetermined2:

Ah, so we must wait for more individuals. Still need tavi and scoots though... they probably become the backups of harmony. Gummy, Vinyl, Big Mac, Octavia, Scootaloo, and Ditzy Do. ASSEMBLE!

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