• Member Since 25th May, 2015
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Zayajackson


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There will be Spelling Errors through out the story.

I will fix them when I get the chance to do so

Also this is the first story I posted on Fimfiction that wasn't completed because this story Will be really fucking long (Judging by the amount of words for each chapter) this will go up to Final Week: Day 5 including some possible bonus chapter that lead up to my possibly worse story (Besides [PROTOTYPE]: Equestrian Division) The Story of Lightning Storm

But you'll find out eventually.

Tip: If there are alot of sexual references, add a SEX tag. Will track for later though.

Lightning Dust is still female in this story, right?

I am right now at chapter 3

Day 3 Wednesday it will take me a little bit to read the entire story once I get that done I will give you some advice on it.

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Alright, Enjoy the Story

Bully and Mares

Why was this capitalized?

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I have no idea, I was kinda just typing up the new long description at that time, I guess I never really noticed what I had right or wrong in it, I'll fix it.

But other than that, how's the story? (I'm aware it may still have spelling or correctional errors in it.)

8118850 I haven't actually read it yet. It does look interesting though.

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Start when you want, It gets updated periodically if I have the idea for the next chapter. I'm working on it now. But when you start reading, enjoy.

How can this story be partly a clopfic?

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To give you the honest answer, I never thought I write any actual porn, I thought I was going to put a crap ton of sexual references in the entire story. Believe me, I'm surprised i even turned into a near full out clopfic with a story to it or something.

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