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Princess Silver Dawn


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This story is about a changeling who's different in more than one way. Sola grows up alone and returns to the changeling village. When she arrives she finds out her mother was gone only to find a golden locket. What will the future hold for our little pink changeling?

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Yay, first story is out! Kind of a depressing way to start your fanfic career, but guess what? My first fic was depressing too! :rainbowwild: I'll keep an eye on this.

6361828 Thanks, and I'm sure I'll have a lot of other good stories coming.:pinkiehappy:

Oh wow!! I love it! This is an absolutely fantastic story!!!!!! Keep up the great work!

First of, the Summary would be much better with Paragraphs. This is among the first things your future reades see. As it was said; It is all in the presentation. Right?
Secondly, it feels as if the Summary is about the story, not what is to happen in the story. Maybe these should be the same thing, but why make a distinction if they are?

On a different note, I love the Changelings.
Both reading about them and writing about them.

I am in several of the related groups and enjoy wihen they are included in any of the Canon episodes. Which happened twice in the latest Season, as I recall. Including the one at the Wedding of Episode 100; Slice of Life.

Now I guess I should read the story and cheer her on.

From what I noted, they apparently live in Villages.

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