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Incredible Blunderbolt

A FIMFic veteran returning from a long hiatus with more rust on his keyboard than the city of Detroit. He's working on cleaning it off, though.


Today is the day Twilight has been waiting for for so long; the day she gets married to her longtime crush. It is too bad, however, that her own brother has to miss it due to the changeling infestation!

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Comments ( 26 )

Your keeping up with the standard of your other fics... I hope this gets featured!
P.S. : i can't stop laughing

thou hast intrigued me...tracking

OK, this was sweet, and the surprise at the end did actually surprise me.:derpytongue2:

Also, the sound of silence? Huh? :pinkiecrazy:

That was fun to read :pinkiehappy:

That was pretty good! An interesting plot twist too! I haven't read I fic like that before but I liked it! :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

653859 They're all just a bunch of fillies playing pretend in day care. And Shining and those other colts were playing I guess a war game and came in and crashed that little pretend wedding. Boys will be boys. :rainbowlaugh:

:ajsmug: Nice. very nice.

This was great, didn't expect that kinda of double plot twist to come around.

very clever, not really my cup of tea normally but I enjoyed it none the less :twilightsmile:

Brilliant you had me there. You so had me.

Did Twilight just get cockblocked?

This is somehow the most adorable thing and the most awesome thing all at once. Such a cute little one shot.

poor little kid twilight :facehoof: she would have ' married ' rainbow :rainbowwild:

>carefully avoiding her hoof- she didn’t want to make things awkward among everypony, including Rainbow Dash.:applejackunsure:

Oh, it was roleplay. Good. I thought it would be a sad ending.

So... Cadance is old enough to babysit Shining Armor.... And then they get married?



Very well written. Although, how much older is Cadence supposed to be compared to Shining Armor? She clearly ages normally as shown by flashbacks. Although this was an alternate universe where the mane six new each other as fillies, so whatever. Either way, very fun. MUSTACHES! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

That was adorable. I didn't expect that plot twist though. Great job! ;)

Aaaahhhh! This was sooooo adorkable! Role play as little fillies and Shining happens to be doing the same and intervenes. Sooooo cute!

That at the end
I never expected that
I was expecting a more mature story than foals role playing
but still no less of an awesome story.

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