Button is always playing games to notice sweetie or so sweetie thinks and join the other cmc on there love stories too
I'm a huge pegasister and love everything about mlp. Favorite couple twipie. Favorite cmc couple button belle
Button is always playing games to notice sweetie or so sweetie thinks and join the other cmc on there love stories too
Not to be rude or anything, but you need an editor.
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6355260 :( this is my first time writing a story
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Not to worry, I can help edit for you :)
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Not to worry, I can help edit for you :)
6356234 thank you
Despite what other people think, I think this is great for your firs chapter, better proofreading too. This is a great start, I can't wait till the next one.
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I agree, and also just finished an edit of the first chapter, which I sent to her. She's offline at the mo, so she probably won't change it for a while...
ButtonBelle, Rumbaloo and PipBloom.
As bucking usual...
6361759 excuse me but I used these cause these are my fav couple don't like .......... (puts on shades for coolness) deal with it, on a no cursing please and I do not care if its my little pony cursing don't do it
6362207 You have your own brain. You don't have to ship them only because everyone ships them. Create your own OTP. Be creative.
6363802 I told I wanted to ship them I love these couples
6365481 Your story still has more downvotes rather than upvotes.
6365965 i noticed :(
6369168 You know, I'll comfort you. Just because the majority downvoted this, doesn't means it's bad. Don't pay much attention to numbers.
6370377 em ok thanks
I think you should update this story a little more often...
Could you please update this more!!
Although many people disliked this i think that the concept, story and potential this has is pretty good
Sorry I. Had a broken computer and now I have a new one can update soon
I honestly love this more than any other fanfic about this couple so keep doing what you're doing (also I'm getting really into this)
Why do people dislike this? Its got a good plot and alot of potential so can you please for the love of celestia update this more, its really great and would love to see more of it.
Also would you by any chance be looking for proofreaders?