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There aren't much Coco Pummel fics... So this was surprising
I like this so I faved it and gave it thumbs up. Now if you don't mind me asking will there only be the one chapter or do you plan to add more cince it is marked as incomplete as of me posting this?
6344443 Crap, I forgot to set the thing to complete. Yeah, it's only one chapter.
6344463 Ok. Still great though. You actually made me go and find other Coco Pommel x human stories after I saw this
6344483 You're welcome.
Okay. . . you may wanna tack on the dark tag and put up a rape warning next to the somnophilia one, because this was definitely rape. Consent was never given nor even considered. Mind you, I don't think that means you should take it down, but if you're gonna make people aware of what's inside the story, that's a pretty big one to miss. I would've liked to have been warned about that.
6344565
I agree with you about that, and I probably should have added the non-consensual part. Not exactly sure on adding dark, though that's mainly because I associate "dark" tags with stuff like domestic abuse, terrorism, killing, etc.
6344604 Having sex with someone incapable of giving consent is pretty dark. The only difference between what's been portrayed and, say, roofying a girl, is that the intent to have sex wasn't there until he found her unconscious.
6344611
Fair enough.
6344611 I'd have to disagree, from a literary standpoint. While I agree rape is a very dark, evil thing, in literature 'dark' is slightly different. 'Dark' in literature typically means things like torture, abuse, or drugging.
6344724 I refer to my previous comparison with roofying, and add that the fact that the character never took into consideration the moral implications of his actions add to the darkness. In my personal opinion, this IS abuse, although I submit that it is abuse without trauma, at least within time frame of the story.
On an unrelated note, apologies to the author if my responses are starting to clog up the comment section. I'll avoid that moving forward.
6344737 A good way to think about it is that, in literature, 'dark' involves things that do cause trauma. 'Dark' has long lasting, psychological effects. Note, if it's just physical trauma, it's usually 'gore', though the two often go hand in hand.
6344737
Oh no, that's okay. And while he has thought about the moral ethics, it was too brief to even consider it as taking in the moral implications. I'll also add that walking in on someone sprawled on the floor drooling and unresponsive and fearing that they died does seem dark enough to warrant the tag, even if it's as brief as the implications.
Why did the 'Ungh's sound like seal noises to me?
Too fast, too short and/or rushed.
You could've written this story in 600 words and it would've felt the same.
Somnophilia/Rape/Whatever fetish isn't the problem here. You should just focus on one thing at a time.
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I don't think it's the walking in and fearing that they died part that's dark, so much as the walking in and raping them part.
I guess i give you a thumb up, not sure how much i really like it, but it is not bad.
Spotted a typo. Pretty big one.
"But you're okay with that. So long as you have her, you'll always be okay with that, because now you have somebody... er... somepony to
loverape in their sleep without even a moment's hesitation".Rape is not a synonym for love. Also it would appear that they gave him exactly the reception he deserved when they attempted to drive him off when he first arrived.
EDIT: And yes I read the warnings in the description. Merely felt it worth pointing out, what with this supposedly being what "I" was thinking.
6468281 (Officer Hot-Pants)
Maybe I didn't read it good, but I'm pretty sure she said she was ok with it.
Btw to the athor, there is a typo : sh? what does it mean? did you want to say she?
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To be fair, I did edit a bit of it after Hotpants pointed out the "typo".
Why is there a "Dark" tag?
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Because of the technical rape.
Most excellent.