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This story is a sequel to I Loved You


A while after the Grand Galloping Gala, Moondancer was invited to attend the royal wedding of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza and Shining Armor. However, the wedding turned into an invasion as Changelings attacked everyone. The resulting battle left her comatose. This story briefly follows up on her time spent comatose.

This takes place after I Loved You and has at least a few trigger warnings: pulling the plug, an introspective of what happens when someone dies, realism in a show full of pastel colored horses, and a little bit of Canterlot Wedding Consequences. That said, do keep in mind that this is tagged as "sad" and not outright "tragedy".

Same image as before by Samutoka.

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Did feel a bit corny at times, but interesting anyway. I'll see where this goes.

6344421 Ah, actually, I forgot to set the status to complete. Sorry about that.

who else read these two stories while listening to whitney houston O-O

Just a little bit too cliche to be really enjoyable, sorry. Never mind the Changeling grunt even knowing such a MacGuffin spell to begin with, but if it's spiteful over not being able to use Moondancer's love to fuel itself, I can't see it using such a spell instead of either ignoring Moondancer, simply knocking her out or straight-up killing her.

I...certainly hope that Cadance only just found out about Moondancer's coma, or just took a long time to figure out there was a possible curse. Six months seems rather a long stretch of time given that Celestia was able to visit Moondancer within presumedly the first couple of days, suggesting there were few enough casualties she was able to visit all the ones in hospital individually. I would have expected Caddy to do the same quickly too.

This was a really good read. A nice surprise to how quickly she woke up. I won't speak on it so not to spoil, but Spike is awesome for that. :moustache:

I feel no one really pays attention to this story's quality. It's actually pretty good, when you go around the grammar mistakes. :twilightsmile:

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