• Member Since 1st Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen February 3rd

Adda le Blue


Occasional author, overbearing aunt, and live-action horsewife.

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Everypony knows that the future is predestined; the very existence of cutie marks proves it. Still, Minuette isn't so sure that she has to make the same mistakes twice.

Two ponies look to the future, and all the while one looks back to the present.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 12 )

Gets a notification and I read the description. I knew that the other was going to be the Doctor because of the title!

Ha ha! This was great! Have a fav. I'd like but it seems I can't.

Yay! Adda is writing again :3

This was a touching read, Adda. I got the feeling there was more going on than the reader knew. I gave you a review if you'd like to take a look at it.

I found this, not knowing what is was... but im glad i stumbled on this gem of a story. The warm emotions mixed with the hard logic of it all cam to gether so perfectly that it just felt so right. The very prospect of time travel is hard snough to grasp but to add in the concept of love? The aura of wonder, sadness and happiness all mox to become something souch more than what the reader could handle. I loved this story not for any of its elements but for what it suceeded in doing. It made a story so perfect that the reader had no time to question the l9gic because of the emotions and at the same time they would have had no time to come to terms with the emotions because of the logic! Best of all? The ending, it was a happy one :'D

I reviewed this story!

My review can be found here.

I almost went to tears!:fluttercry:

This was a lot packed into such a small wordcount. Great job!

Beautiful stuff, and an outcome that's likely for the best. I doubt even Puddinghead would want to spend so much time talking to tourists from the future. In all seriousness, thank you for this.

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