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Scootaloo, tough Scootaloo...she's been through more than imaginable, but when a caring mare discovers that she's an orphan, what events could lead to Scootaloo meeting her dreams? How could she go from so little to so much family, housing, talent, and love?

When the filly's life goes through the rollercoaster of romance, the river of remorse, and the clouds of destiny, how will she react? Will she be able to handle it all, or will she give out along the way?


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One quick question... Does she have her cutie mark in this chapter?

653487 You haz made :yay: Fluttershy happy.

All that happiness! Makes me wonder why there's a sad tag. Guess we'll have to wait for the rest of the story to find out ey :pinkiecrazy:
But a well started story nevertheless, can't wait for the rest :twilightsmile:

Nice story so far. Like this chapter a lot. I'm sure they had there reasons for running. Sadly still being young death wasn't on the mind. Hope Scoots figures that out. Like that Rainbow and Flutter adopted her. Its really sweet. Will be watching out for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

(clap clap clap clap clap) Five claps for the great story! It's even a Scootaloo story! :scootangel:

664905 ... Quick I need my troll face repellent!

666314 This sounds noobish but how do you post pictures? I'm new to this part of the internets.


It's a fimfiction enhancement pack, its by iloveportalz0r here's the link to the blog post about it,


666399 Sorry I meant pictures like the multiple "Please go on" pics I can't seem to find the URL of.

666469 I'm-a try something.http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png If it doesn't work it'll look like letters and numbers.

EDIT: It didn't work.

I suppose if my oc is going to be in this, i need to read it xD

If there was one thing that is the most . . . prominent of your mistakes, it would be your capitalization issues.
That's constructive criticism. Otherwise for that, I see nothing that is outwardly wrong with it.
I feel like there's something else, but I can't put my finger on it . . .


My editing stuff isn't quite working because I'm not at home at the moment, so yeah....:twilightblush:

constructive criticism:
Capitalization and run-on sentences.
That is all.

I like how you managed to squeeze in the MLP Pilot episode into your plot.
Constructive criticism:
Run-on sentences
Wayy too rushed.
That is all.

guess who's first? First again? Subtles first, SO EAT A DICK! jk guise,

Anyways, serious comment time. This is probably the best chapter of any of your fics that I'VE edited, and it was fun to read. PM your cell number, that'll make it so much easier to plan editing sessions. I'm going to need you to edit my fic's new chapter too :scootangel:

I personally enjoyed this chapter, happy Scoots is happy now. Patiently waiting for more :twilightsmile:

Also, thanks for making me nearly burst out laughing at work from your very final statement :rainbowlaugh:

You are gaining steam with this. I'm keen to see where this one goes...:yay::rainbowwild:

waiting patiently for next chapter :twilightsmile:

LOVE THE STORY!!! I'm definately following the story! :yay:


Two things

1. Thank you very much!


Nice. That was just beautiful.

yay! new update! keep up the good work and I can't wait how flutters and dashie are gonna meet scoots next time!

I am just going to go out on a limb and guess that star probably isn't dead that is just what I was thinking anyway

786639 Hey now, other ponies are going to meet scoots as well. I do get some benefits, being the editor and all xD so I know the plot:3

786630 This author writes VERY heart wrenching material, doesn't he?:moustache:

Awesome! Next chapter will be awesome.

805339 Proud to say I edited this. Though not as well as I usually do...:raritydespair:

I smiled right when you said it was smile inducing.

GAH! I hate you for giving me d'awiabetus :flutterrage:
keep up the good work!

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