Horrific torments in the Wood of Suicides…but the ending just doesn't work for me.
This chapter is EqG rather than Human. Human doesn't really fit with the rest at all, either. Horror, now that it's been added, probably should be applied to this story.
Horrific torments in the Wood of Suicides…but the ending just doesn't work for me.
This chapter is EqG rather than Human. Human doesn't really fit with the rest at all, either. Horror, now that it's been added, probably should be applied to this story.
Corrections offered without malice.
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Dear merciless night, add a sexual assault warning to this one.
Never sat right with me, eternal punishment for suicide. And why is her lover sexually assaulting her? Guessing it's a demon.
I'm hoping that was just a coma dream, yeesh.