Hi, thanks for taking the time to read my fanfics, which I put a lot of effort into. If you hate fluttercord, beware!
It's Hearts and Hooves Day, and Discord's heart is just fluttering with affection for a certain pink haired pegasus (No pun intended). He does try asking her that special question, but is surprisingly too shy to ask, even with his snarky attitude, because he fears if she says no it will ruin their friendship. But the most important question is: does Fluttershy feel the same way?
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I only just started, so far the only problems I see are formatting (that can easily be fixed in edit mode) and this:
I have no problem with that sort of thing. I'm just wondering if this was your intention, because Rarity's usually chasing after stallions (not to mention that "handsome" is for some reason often referred to males).
Finished.
Aw, that was cute! I like how Discord tried doing Fluttershy's chores only to mess them up.
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Eye see what you did there
6342003 OOPS! Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it.
6342003 I mean, I don't have a problem with it either, but I just think that the show portrayed Rarity as more likely to fall for a stallion.
6343598 Yes! Somebody gets my references!
If anyone else picked up on those, you're awesome.
Such an adorable story.
6343982 Aww, thanks!
I thought this story would be really unpopular, so when I came home from school to see that it was already my most popular story,
I almost spit cereal all over my laptop
6344182 I was thinking that too with my first story, but after while it was my most popular story.
6343598 I don't get it. Can you explain please?
6344384 The line in bold is a reference to Elf, the movie. It's funny
6344407 Ah, I see. Thanks.
FLUTTERCORD FOREVER!!!
6346059 I ship it!
Couldn't even finish it. The formatting errors are numerous and make reading it a chore. Please fix them.
6346354 Yay we all do!!
Alright, my incompetent brain has finally figured out how to format correctly! I think I may have fixed all the formatting errors/comma splices/etc... but if you see any, please point them out! Thanks!
Formatting errors are nearly eliminated, only 3-4 that I saw and sadly don't have the time to point them out at the moment. Other than that, I liked it. Quick question though, when did Pinkie become Cadence? data.archive.horse/4ch/mlp/image/1422/13/1422131623687.jpg
Edit: Also next time, respond to my comment, rather than post on my user page. Just personal preference.
6350900 Thanks! Also, Pinkie and Cadance should get together sometime and do some shipping analysis. Also, I will reply to your comment next time, thanks for telling me.
This sentence doesn't make sense.
Two characters should speak in the same paragraph. You need to start a new one when the speaker changes.
Other than that though... GUH, this is so cute!
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Hahaha