Friendship Is Power universe: Roughly taking after Tank for the memories. Rainbow after destroying destroying a good section of the weather factory(thankfully the part that was devoted to ponyvill) has been sentenced by Princess Luna in court to community service, in the rainbow factory. Luna have not realize though that things have majorly changed since the past, where creating rainbows was a far more dangerous job in the Past. As such Rainbow is Just a tour guide the weather factory/rainbow sections. And basically you're on the tour! Yes this can be used as a self insert story.
Chapters (4)
Oh Geez! My heart slowed a bit when I saw the title.
Yeah, that song creeped me out some.
Dear God.. This reads like a trainwreck.
Wow, thanks for that middle school grade information, I would've never known that had you not taught me.
If you're wondering about dislikes, i'm one of 'em.
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Please explain, why you say it's a train wreck?
6333211 You're not the only one! And my nightmare night story of one of mine that's coming up later, is trying to write lyrics of a slightly creepy or tune! Let's just say joining the military is a bit more terrifying that people realize. Try not to spoil a story that's coming up!
6336150 sorry. I'm so used to reading stories that my ability to predict the plot has become a sixth sense to me.
Either that, or I'm getting better as a reviewer.
6337403 cool No problem, although I wouldn't mind if you give me the number for the winning lottery ticket!!
6337613 Depends on which story the lottery took place in.
You'll need an editor. This is filled with grammatical mistakes. I couldn't read the second chapter.