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The Changelings won. After years of regaining their strength and numbers on the outskirts of Equestria, along with reworking their plan, they have managed to invade the country and corner the last remaining free ponies in the Crystal Empire. All the while, three princesses discuss war strategies with what little they have while the other tries to remember when she lost the meaning of friendship...
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6344543 Yes.
6344700 I'm sorry, but I'd take your "review" seriously if you avoided language like that and were a little less harsh. Plus, I'd like if you evaluated on what you're saying and made it feel less like opinions.
I'm sorry you didn't like it though, and hope to improve in the future.
The idea is good, the story needs work.
6344925 Would you care to evaluate? I do know I could've added more backstory, by the way, and explained things a bit more but by then I was losing inspiration. It's more or less a polished up 'sketch', you could say, of a story.
6344925 Also, I made a blog post further explaining why it stands as it is now.
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I'm a bit rushed at the moment, but when I get back I'll go in-depth.
Why is the title of German?
6355432 A reference to a show.
“Peace demands the most heroic labor and the most difficult sacrifice. It demands greater heroism than war. It demands greater fidelity to the truth and a much more perfect purity of conscience.” ― Thomas Merton
Wonderfully done again, I'm glad I took the time to read this.
When I first found this... I didn't know what to think. The name drew me in, and the plot kept me there until the end... I don't know, I may just be a bit sappy, but this story is really a great read and one I thoroughly enjoyed. I liked the lack of backstory personally, it gave me a chance to come up with my own support for why this story is happening, and whether or not she made the right choice. If only I could fill that green bar with my thu'um. But alas, I have forgotten the shout to do so...
Hmm, you've got a interesting way of painting Twilight in a far less heroic light when it comes to traumatic situations. It's almost as if you don't like her cannon character or you just prefer her to be the subject of torment, lol. Either way its a solid one shot and I enjoyed reading it because it was dark and I'm a all around horrible person.
You can has review!