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Prism Shine


Guess who joined the Undertale Trash Can?

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Rainbow Dash finally has the chance to become a Wonderbolt. But as soon as she gets into the tryouts, many events await her.


Inspired by the song "The Seventh Wonderbolt" by Silvia Hound.

A/N: I am bad at making long descriptions.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 28 )

I'm likin' the story so far :)

Pretty good! Keep going!

It is a good start.

Aaaaa!! More awesome Soardash fics!!
Can't wait to see more, you did a fantastic job on this first chapter ^-^



I'm pretty sure we can all guess who that trainer is :ajsmug:

I loved it!:heart: It had a wonderful start. Keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Dohoho.

It's a girl, though. :trollestia:

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Thank you! I'll be working hard to complete this! :rainbowdetermined2:

Very nice so far. I'll keep an eye on this one. I just wish that you'd gone more into Dash telling Scoots (That's probably just me, though- I love Scootaloo to pieces :scootangel:)

Looking forward to the next chapter. :yay:

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Awh. Thanks!

I know I didn't go into Dash telling Scoots, but I didn't think it was necessary. Sorry. :twilightblush:

Well, it looks like a promising start.

Pacing seems good, albeit a little fast, but it's understandable to see why you did that, so no worries there. :rainbowdetermined2:

But...train? To Cloudsdale? Isn't Cloudsdale...you know...in the sky? Unless you're going to explain this in the next chapter. In which case, I'll shut up and wait. :twilightblush:

As a fellow SoarinDash writer, I'll follow with interest my friend. :twilightsmile:

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Ufu, you'll see why in the next chapter. :pinkiecrazy:

I like it...i hope too see chapter 2 soon! :rainbowdetermined2::trollestia:

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Thanks! I'm working on it! :rainbowdetermined2:

It was HUGE. Probably as big as her bedroom back in Ponyville.

How big is her bedroom?!?!? *O*

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xD Just imagine it as big as a stage in a concert.

6462351 ……I can't even 'O'

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You'll see why soon. :pinkiecrazy:

6463097 so is this a soarindash or a spitdash shipping?

6486312 :pinkiesick: No thanks...Im sure its a good stroy and all but im not a fan of that ship at all...I only ship Rainbow with either Twilight or Spitfire, not Soarin

6486312 I mean no offense or anything, I mean Soarin is a good character but I just dont ship SoarinDash...

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Yeah, okay.

Go along then.

Nice, can't wait to the next chapter... By the way if you are looking for art I can always help out with that

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Thanks!

Sweet, I'll ask if I'm too lazy to draw them myself :raritywink:

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