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Welcome to a piece of existence in which a valiant knight rises from his imprisonment against the powers that be in order to bring about true freedom to a land of talking, singing, and dancing ponies!

Now with more Whedon in every bite.


My second attempt at a fic and something I actually intend to write. A Displaced story line with elements from Artix Entertainment, Joss Whedon's Angel, and Most importantly...MLP!! I own none of the aforementioned works of fiction. Please don't sue!!

Chapters (60)
Comments ( 67 )

The only Omniknight who I know and will always be to me shall be Purist Tunderwrath Omniknight.
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Still have a like

Hehe, and thank yoooou...

This seems rushed and confusing. Not explained well enough.

Hmm...this is only my second attempt. Anything I should go into more detail with?

Sunset, just do it. Learn from the man in stone.

Snakes! I like snakes.

And www steep into the displaced pool.

Darn it, I can only the like button once:ajsleepy:this is sad news.

6682012 I'm glad you like it that much.

6669034 Sorry it took so long to respond.. but go into more detail with jumping around...?

Wait... Artix Entertainment. As in DragonFable's creators?

7296231 yes...those guys...hmmm...Wonder how well twilight and warlic would get along...how would ganloth react to spike...how afraid should we be if Cystro met pinkie...Aria and fluttershy team up with robina the hood to steal from blueblood...Shining armor and Rolith comparing notes...all the possibilites.

7296295 Ooh I'm not even there yet, I have an entire Star Captain arc to go through before I actually hit Dragonfable territory.

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Cysero... and... PINKIE?! Bruh! You... y-you can't just do that! The fabric o' reality cain't take it!

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As the first Nautican Lich you have my attention.

I may just try this story out if only for the fact you reminded me i have a still active founders account on AQW

It's getting a little hard to understand the connections being made to the things that have happened in this story. I mean, I know you said you're glossing over Sunset Shimmer's part of the story, but there's so much that's unexplained as well. Like, why can Angel talk? Why is Spike a vampire? How did Twilight become his student? You need to explain these things for people to not get confused.

Yet more confusing lore and past events that go unexplained.

I'm a bit worried that there is no Sunset tag. I mean, it does mean she won't be that important in the long-run right? :unsuresweetie:

7909395 ...Oh no I've made a terrible mistake. The interlude chapters are Sunset driven

The Inkwell part seemed pretty rushed. It actually even took me some time to notice it was Inkwell, since her appearance wasn't mentioned. There was only suddenly a new voice. So it was a tad confusing. :rainbowhuh:

7909424 yeah...Im Not very good with timing.

The first part with Azure?/Angel? was rather confusing. I have no idea who that was or what happened. :rainbowhuh:

interesting........:trixieshiftright:

i cant seem to follow the transition from sunset to twilight, not enough stuff to go on with the backstory.......:facehoof:
its really confusing to read coz of the teleporting plots....pacing bruh!:twilightsmile:

"teh he spoiler!!" :pinkiecrazy: "QUIET PINKIE!" :facehoof:

"I need sleep FLUFFLE PUFF!" I said

They blew up his heart...

HOW!

Finally made it to the end!

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Well, when magic circulates through an already faulty and unstable magical heart explosions tend to follow. I'll go over THAT once the final few Akriloth chapters are written.

Heeeeeyyyyyy someone who's also writing a fic for Artix Entertainment! I'm doing the original Adventure Quest if you're interested. Good luck to you bro, Battle On!

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I'll make sure to check it out!

I've never heard of Artix Entertainment... Can you tell me more about it?

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They're a game company that mostly specializes in web browser based games. Though I think their recent title managed it's way onto steam

So Gabby is looking for Choco:rainbowlaugh:

Nice chapter dude can't wait to read more

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Thanks, I really wanted to bring that up, make it so that every interaction has an actual impact.

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It doesn't make sense that if they die that Rarity and Applejack would be at a party having fun.

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No yeah, they live. (Obviously)

A man in black peers into this world and says, "Interesting reaction. I wonder what else this Omni-Knight is capable of. I wonder why he tolerates such discrimination?"

And now I am finally reading this. You better be ready Azzy. I'm not going to be nice when reviewing this.

Fair explanation of the SP mechanic, yet I wouldn't have expected Sunset's familiar to be a fox. I will admit though, the stat roll actually did get to me chuckle a little. Yet, for some reason, you have 100 in Intellect. I doubt that in an actual fight in AQ that would be helpful, unless you're likely only level 100. Why the armor set though? Demon Armor, while nifty in some circumstances, provides very few actual bonuses in terms of combat. The Void sword is a good one in particular, and I can't remember what the Harp does. I think it's a Charisma boost for SP but I'm not sure. A strange set for battle, since the Void sword would use Melee, the Harp would correspond to a Beastmaster, and the Demon Armor, while effective for a Warrior, wouldn't have that many uses since it's Darkness/Fire and many of it's powers correspond to those Elements, which only Darkness would be effective against Celestia, if not Fire healing her or doing nothing. As a whole, I think the Overlord armor would have faired better.

Interesting though, I'm rather intent to see where this leads.

Hmm... I do hope you know what you're doing, especially since you skipped Sunset. All that build up and for nothing now. Let's see where this takes us.

Well now it makes sense why your Intellect is only about 100. You're only level 120. About, anyways. Here's to hoping your SP doesn't fail you when you need it.

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