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I like ponies – especially with mushroom gravy.


When Bonbon returns home, she is welcomed by the anger and the tears of her lifetime companion.

Will she be able to patch things up with her? And at what cost?

(Yet another [belated] take on episode #100, but different from the others, I hope.)

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Huh. I can honestly say I didn't see that coming.

That’s why I hoped it would be somewhat different from most of the other stories on the same prompt!

callpony, point in your favor - nice twist on the ending.

Thanks, and thanks for faving it!

I don't even know how to comment on this story. What the hell. Like I guess its a bittersweet end. Hell of a thing that Lyra is gona get BonBon fired. Who knows, maybe she wasn't lying about not wanting her to do dangerous missions and set this entire thing up so as to keep bonbon safe in a twisted way.

On second look isn't this entire thing a horrible conflict of interest? Lyra is effectively BonBon's boss dating a employee under her position. Wouldn't Lyra be under scrutiny for this? She would know BonBon's status beforehand but still started a relationship.

This is all kinds of messed up.

It is unsaid in the story, but the idea was that Lyra would be the supervisor monitoring not only Bonbon, but also the other agents operating in the same area. At the end, Lyra’s love for Bonbon prevails, and Lyra cannot stand to be in the same situation vis a vis Bonbon than Bonbon thought she was vis a vis Lyra.

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