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When a clash of planetary proportions drives the Royal Sisters apart, Twilight Sparkle must find a way to make them reconcile with each other.

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Ezn

Yes! So glad to see this up and marked "Incomplete"!

Love how crass Luna can be. In fact, she minds me of Nightmare Moon a lot more than I expected.

Something tells me that a certain pink party pony from Ponyville is coming to Canterlot!~ :pinkiegasp:

Oh God, I love this. :pinkiehappy:

This should be fun n_n

Oh god, she's going to involve Pinkie Pie. This won't end well.

Hmm looks promising...

Time to break out the big guns! Everything is better with gracious amounts of Pinkie Pie!
Now, how might Celestia and Luna try to bribe her? :trollestia:
"Access to a unlimited supply of cake" vs "posting party invitations in the sky, written in stars"

Sibling rivalries... Taken to the EXTREME! And a the end there? :trollestia: made an appearance. Poor Twilight. :facehoof:

Oh god. Not Pinkie.

Holy shit, this promises to be awesome ! Love what you did :pinkiehappy:. Speaking of love, Luna's confession looks like a Freudian slip, hehe :trollestia:

Some editing :
"Before they she could have said anything to save face, [...]" Too much words :coolphoto:

Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Wait what's a fiefdom? "Stops there and Looks it up"...fucking take it!

"I love you twilight sparkle" omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg

Well I'd be torn between those 2 as well if it was me...let's hope pinkie can solve this

Time to bring in the big guns. :pinkiehappy:

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE

So, they're bringing in Rainbow Dash? [/sarcasm]

Time to bring out the big guns.

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Mebbe not. She does hate losing, after all.

677471 Ack, no how in Equestria have I missed that? Thanks for pointing it out! :D

Hahaha! I just adore Trollestia and Lunatic! The madness has been 20% doubled!

I'm sure that's possible! Right?

:rainbowhuh:

Send in the trolls! :trollestia:

Here comes Pinkie!!:pinkiesmile:

Well, the good news for Twilight is that there going to be a lot of playtesting already done for the game. Possibly even some full-up analysis. Working from that should make the process of balancing and improving, (e.g. fixing the risk/reward of the Nebula), much easier than with a completely new game.

Now, presuming the new edition of the game is successful and makes both princesses happy: Does Twilight have it in her to say something like "I seem to recall a number of promises...."

Amazing! I love the characterization and the interplay between the Sisters. Can't wait to see where you are taking this, but it looks very promising.:pinkiehappy:

I demand a second chapter!

this is really good; I loved "HE-MAN AND THE MASTERS OF THE UNIVERSE "reference, I hope you update soon

hope you add a new chapter soon

Please make more!

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