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The Insightful Sleepover

One late night, after a pinkie pie party, a group of six ponies stays at their friends for the night. Not even ten-minutes go by before the former partners, Vinyl and Octavia, get into an argument, but later that night one of their friends, Derpy, is going to find out that maybe they are not arguing, but trying to cover up a secret of theirs.

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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #1 · Aug 15th, 2015 · · ·

Grammar and spelling aside (both of which need to be worked on by the way), this story falls rather short of the description. While we are told that Vinyl and Octavia are arguing, we are not told what it is about. As such, we have no idea how unrealistic it becomes. I also don't really see how what Derpy sees explains why they are arguing so much anyways.

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