• Member Since 2nd May, 2015
  • offline last seen 4 hours ago

mistercokehold8


If a train leaves Canterlot at 100 MPH, whats the conductors name?

E

After an incident on a tropical island off the coast of Equestria, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are chosen by Princess Celestia herself to investigate the island, and make sure it is as safe as can be. This is the story of what unfolded.

This story is heavily inspired by both the JP Franchise, and another fanfiction on this site. If you find similarities, please note I did get that authors permission.

ENJOY!

Cover art (C) chiimich Crimson (C) HTKWolfe777

Chapters (17)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 35 )

(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

This is an awesome story! I have seen mistakes on rare occasions, and I would be delighted to edit the story for you. I will only correct mistakes and maybe rearrange phrases to improve the flow of the story.

In the control room the situation couldn’t be any worst.

Should be:

In the control room the situation couldn’t be any worse.

“We have a problem your majesty.”

Add a comma between problem and your.

Lightning didn’t want Anypony to see what she was doing.

Don't need a capital for anypony.

I'm sorry for your loss. Remember that she will always be watching over you, from Equestria, Heaven or wherever else you believe people who pass from this world go. Given the speed of your uploads, you deserve a rest.:pinkiesad2:

The Crusaders’ stayed close to each other.

Don't need an apostrophe there.

Applejack then center has to be a few miles from here.”

Should be:

Applejack, the center has to be a few miles from here.”

“They aint monsters Sweetie Belle, they’re just animals. Besides, they’re vegetarians, gentle dinos.” Applejack noted.

Need an apostrophe in ain't.

“What do you call a blind dinosaurs dog?”

Need another apostrophe in dinosaur's.

There were many more, but I can't be bothered right now. Too many.

What's the other story you mentioned?

i am sorry for you loss :pinkiesad2: but this was an AMAZING story! and i can wait for the sequel :twilightsmile:

Lightning Dust is Dennis. Whelp... Her fate's sealed.

Aw man. I was hoping Crimson would be the untouchable badass that the warden is in the novel.

remarkable work my friend! massive fan of jurassic park and will read on!

wonderful story my friend! again huge fan of jurassic park!

Shavin cream? I know it was in the movie, but their ponies, not people! What excuse could a pony, much less a mare give to need shaving cream? Now wippedcreme that would have made sense.

Umm, am I the only one who remembers that cows are sentient in this world? Did they really just feed a thinking, sentient creature to another and the only concern was table manners?

Is your Jurassic Pony story based off of the Book, or the movie? As in, which one did it take the most inspiration from? I liked the movies, except JP3, and the original Book was good too. If you haven't read the book, try it. You might be surprised at how different it is. I know I was!

Why doesn't this story have a dark and/or a gore tag?

Okay, I can't let this one pass, the idea of a T-Rex's vision being based on movement is a load of crap, Michael Crichton himself pointed this out in his second novel, saying that it makes no sense because prey's first instinct is to freeze, so not being able to see a non-moving thing is stupid. This is one thing that I never really liked about the movies, and I'm just saying, you didn't really have to adapt everything.

Other than that, good fanfic so far.

"Oh Celestia!" Flash was beginning to panic. Then to the surprise and horror of the CMC, he threw open the door, and bolted off into the rain.

"Where are you going?!" Flash ran until he came to the small outhouse just on the other side of the paddock.

"He left us..." Applebloom said in horror. In the other jeep the older mares frowned as Flash ran off.

:rainbowderp::facehoof: Flash, you need help! :rainbowlaugh:

I laughed so hard at this scene, and cringed in fear at the same time! Well done!

I also like how you separated Equestrian Flash from Human Flash: they may look and talk the same, but that doesn't mean Horse Flash is as cool as Human Flash!

7059492 that may be true, but remember the "dinosaurs" in Jurassic Park aren't true dinosaurs, they're mutant aberrations.

Why didn't I discover this amazing story and their sequels sooner. As a JP fan I am ashamed of myself for not finding this sooner. This was amazing.

6579632 You got a great point, why was it shaving cream.

7404287 Gift for her non-existent husband?
We do know ponies *can* have beard.

6580293
Alternate universe, where Mooriella and the gang doesn't exist...
...
...
... Maybe.

Okay, this is starting to turn into a replay of the movie, only with ponies replacing the actors.

I got a bad feeling about this. yeah, let's totally bring our sisters along on this investigation of a theme park full of extinct creatures brought back to life through the miracle of science

Welp, Flash is going to die.

I like how you took lines from the movie, and interesting that Fluttershy is suppose to be Jeff Um, um, Goldblum

I feel like the vehicles shouldn't be cars, they should be wagons

Okay, I don't think all the mane six belong here. Like, I get why Twilight would be there *being an Equestrian princess and all* and Fluttershy of course due to her connection to animals. But I feel like the rest don't need to be there and like the guy above said, this is just a near scene-by-scene recreation of the movie along with dialogue

I will never understand why they chose frog DNA, we all know it's just for the part with the dinosaurs can change sex in a single sex environment, but Komodo Dragons can also do that and they're reptile, and Velociraptors are just angry-wolf-turkeys that's supposed to be the size of a house cat. Though to be fair, if someone drinks a shot glass every time there's an inaccuracy, I doubt they'll stay awake long.

“Something just doesn’t feel right.” The alicorn responded, looking at the skeletons in thought. Scorch lead the group until he lead them to a small private theather.

*twilight looks at sorch*
"the T-Rex is gonna get out soon"
"wha-"
*T-Rex Breaks out*

“No, all I’m saying is life….finds a way.” Twilight touched her hoof against the baby’s claws. Something was bothering her.

Ok whoever said that line is going to survive

Applejack Apple
Dr. Applejack Grant Apple

Who was the unfortunate unicorn worker? Just curious.

Flash is a bit out-of-character in this story, but, regardless, I never liked him anyway.

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!