• Member Since 27th Jul, 2015
  • offline last seen Jun 10th, 2018

Cringe Queen


Name was previously Randomepony2003

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Kris and his younger brothers had to move and go to Canterlot high school. Kris, serious about everything, the "dad" of them, and likes school. Luke, second oldest, he is hot-headed all the time, lazy, and likes sports. Issac, the third oldest, hes fun, crazy and loves video games and anime. Finally Shey, shy, behaving, and likes to read. Together will they survive together or just make a mess?

Thank you Unidentified for being like my editor for a little.
And a special thanks to DASATOILETfor the idea of the story!!!And now editing!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 30 )

Ooh, I really hope this doesn't have too much spelling errors. I cringe every time I see one. :rainbowderp:

Jejejeje cool i love it it has its errors here and there but im not the person that looks at errors i just read it good work
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Conterlot

Seriously?

his the oldest

Didn't reread your description before you published it, obviously.

hes serious
hes the second oldest
hes the third oldest
hes fun

Do you know what an apostrophe is?

6341945 the Auto corrects says there fine so.....and I'm not a good at spelling....

6341945 I fixed it I hope you like it now! :pinkiehappy:

Thank you Unidentified for being like my editor.

I haven't even found all the errors in the first chapter let alone the story. :rainbowlaugh:

You can save the thanks until I'm done. :pinkiesmile:

6926465 I was planing while he was taken he would pass some girls and he would go," Ladys~"

6926542 Blackout and Raincloud where freaking out because , um, it's hard to explain

6926542 they were freaking out cause they know them from the minds of their creators......us

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I would be happy to draw a cover art for you since it seems that you are looking for one. Just PM me of how you want it.

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