Derpy never got jealous over her friend, Rainbow Dash. Even though she had everything a mare could ever want: fame, friends in high places, to be the hero. While Derpy works an exhausting job with long hours, make a few friends, never considered a hero, but it never bothered her until she sees Rainbow's influence had got to the only pony who saw Derpy as a hero.
Cover art! Check him/her out!
Special thanks to: Savoured Thoughts, Conan, Lord Of Dorkness, DemonBrightSpirit, Manaphy, Level Dasher and ashi, for all their help making this fic happen. Thanks guys!
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I like it but, was that thing at the end about a freak of nature an insult towards derppy?
Also you should make the names of other users a like to thare fimfic.
That cover art of Derpy is staring into my soul....
thank you for such a heart warming story! derpy and dinky best ponies! you did them proud with this fine short story , kudos and well done to you!!
Very cute and sweet. 7.5
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6525164 Well thanks for giving it a chance. Any tips you might like to share on how I can improve?
6525224 Yeah....kinda.
A nice, decent take on Derpy's dilemma with dinky.
6525781 I'm glad you enjoyed it.