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Just A Random Pegasus


I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.

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While at an elite social gathering in Canterlot, you see a stallion. You know you've heard about him somewhere before, and the things others told you weren't exactly polite. You were told that he is a prince, but he is not your prince charming. He was described as rude, selfish, and arrogant.

Oh no. He's giving you the eye. Now he's walking up to you.

Yeah, this won't turn out completely horrible... right?

(Written in present tense, second person neuter perspective)

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While I don't usually enjoy second person narratives, this one is actually funny. Plus the way it's written, where the main character could be easily either be a mare or a stallion, and the way His Highness is constantly pursuing while keeping the personality we love to hate is pulled off quite well.

Comment posted by Elemental Fury deleted Aug 13th, 2015

Poor guy didn't realize he came on a little to strong with his flirting it seems. I like that you kept him in character but didn't go over the top and exaggerated with it. Celestia probably just didn't like that she/he rejected her nephew so loudly in a way one might picture on purpose to embarrass him. That clearly wasn't the main character's goal but still he probably didn't want more ponies starring at him after the brief scene.

The comedy really pushes it in this story!:rainbowlaugh:

Lol, this is great! I love it!

This was so cool!

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