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VitalSpark


Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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Two MLP fans who live half a world away from each other begin a romance RP.

This is a slightly experimental style of story, following two parallel narratives: a romance between Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash in Equestria, and the relationship between two RPers in our world.

Although the rules of fimfiction forbid chat logs being published as stories, I'll note that the chat logs in this story are fictional — they have been entirely crafted by the author, and are not just copied and pasted from a real chat — and only form a small part of the story. I asked a moderator before I even started writing, and he seemed to think it would be okay. While the story is intentionally written as if it could have been an RP, I can assure you I wrote the whole thing myself. I've never even RPed PinkieDash. :rainbowwild::pinkiesmile:

This story is a birthday present for one of the most amazing individuals on the planet. Many thanks to Infinity Shade, scootaloo96, and Frowning Sugarcoat for pre-reading this, and offering me their feedback, which I blissfully ignored. :pinkiecrazy:

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Comments ( 33 )

I'm pretty sure the image is from a video where Pink kills Dash

6440456
I think you might be right. That doesn't happen in this story though.

I helped? :rainbowhuh: K then

*Image cover*
No no no no no no no....NO!
Do not think blood. blood. blood. blood. blood......Do not think...blood...
*Sarachi had one thumb in his mouth and he was rocking slowly back and fouth*

i like this story :twilightsmile:

And i'm normally not a fan of mane 6 shipping so it means something:pinkiehappy:

6440564
Well the ending doesn't necessarily imply secks. Plus she's older at at the end of the story than she is at the beginning. The birthday that occurs might be a milestone birthday like 16 or 18.

6440579
That wasn't the interpretation I intended, but I can see how it could be taken than way. Ultimately I'm of the school of thought that readers are free to interpret a story whichever way makes the most sense to them.

Frist thing the next morning

First

Adorable story!:raritywink::pinkiehappy:

I just wanted to see how this would play out, and I thought it was very adorable. A few spelling errors, but nonetheless, I liked it. Nice job! :twilightsmile:

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Towards the end I was really rushing to get this finished in time for someone's birthday, so it has had almost zero proofreading. (The pre-readers I mentioned mostly only saw early, incomplete versions.) :facehoof: Hopefully any errors don't detract from the story too much.

6440769
Oh, alright. That's fine, and no the spelling was just something I picked up.

Dan it i was going to do something like this:raritycry:

any way nice

I approve of this story. Random unimportant entity whose word is worth as much as the dirt. But I approve

And then nothing NSFW happened. :raritywink:

Oh, wait, somepony is underage... :twilightoops:

Many thanks to Infinity Shade, scootaloo96, and Lesbian Sonata Dusk for pre-reading this, and offering me their feedback, which I blissfully ignored. :pinkiecrazy:

glad i could be part of the process. or atleast getting early access :P

Aww. Adorable symbolism. An unconventional story, but still an enjoyable one. I liked it.

"Roleplay ehh. Kinky."
-Johnny Bravo

Oh wow I just saw this!!!
Upvoted and loved!

If I didn't know any better if think you had a special girl in mind you met on here!

what happens O+O :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiegasp:

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Maybe I'll be able to tell you on 25 September? :raritywink:

6451236 REALLY?????????????????? :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

6454198
No, not really. I wish really.

Maybe in a few years.

6454232 :/ now I am sad sad sad i don't have years sadly

It ends there? Okay then.

Cliffhangers...My old enemy...

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