'Modify the teleporter' he said, 'We'll be fine' he said... *Sigh* Now we're stuck in a colorful land of ponies with no definite escape route. Just me and Etzer...
I hope.
But what if something happens? What if Zo... No. He was banished years ago.
Well, welcome to a story I WANT to finish (And also the first Geometry Dash crossover I guess...) Alright, first a thank you to Zealous Shift, my editor. Secondly, a thank you to RobTop for making GD. I LOVE that game. And last, I own none of the characters in this story. Don't sue me.
Edit: OMG VOOP READ
Rated "T" for a single swear word in the first chapter. They wouldn't let me rate it "E".
Chapters (3)
I haven't read this yet, but I can say one thing... About time.
K, read it, and it's acually brilliant. Please continue this, this needs more popularity.
(GD 2.0 is bae)
6384984 Glad you like it! :D
Next chapter should be out when I can get my lazy ass off my games.
i come to crossover tag to see some interesting stories.then i found this crossover fic to an storyless game.well,i am gonna give it a shot.
Fact:Deadlocked is so hard
well,i have readed all of it,it needs some improvement.
First,this story fast as hell,i mean some of the crossover have it "crossover" on Part 5 to 10,and they are pretty long,this is just way too fast that they already met the ponies on part 2,it didn't mean you must restart the story,atleast slow it down a bit.
Second,i don't know... maybe make the ending of a part less cliffhanging?probably that will work.
(also on the future,i recommend add some bad things that the Teleporter do to Equestria,up to you what will happen)
6388329 Well, sorry if you don't enjoy how I like to cut to the chase. That's just how I write.
For the cliffhangers, again, writing style.
Thanks for the criticism, though! It is appreciated.
6388372 nah,that's fine,i am looking forward for this story.
Question: may you please state which Icons Viprin and Etzer are? That would help a bit.
They feed off of music? These are my kind of cubes!!!
Also when is the next chapter coming? I want moar!
6657105 Next chapter should be out when my editor's done with it! Also, Voop is cube 45, Etzer is the cube on the banner.
Honestly, I love GD, but this is too far. Keep the ponies out, please.
kappalicious :^)
Before I read this, I bet that "Zo" stands for Zobros.