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Apple Bloom spends her days with the CMC's going to school, playing games, and trying to get her cutie mark.... and snacking on any sweet treat she can find. So of course, when Granny Smith's freshest batch of cookies makes the scene, what's a filly to do with her weekend off other than try and find ways to get the delicious treats all to herself?
Stand-alone sequel can be found: Scootaloo's Day Off
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This was a really nice story, I enjoyed it a lot.
Keep up the great work!
I couldn't stop laughing at this!
You captured all their characters almost perfectly! Is there a chance you could write a "Day Off" for all the crusaders? I think it would be as funny, as this one! I really like the picture too, it's pretty adorable. You sir have earned a follower. Keep up the good work! 
It's something I could consider but would probably take me a while to figure out. Unlike a lot of people I've found, I'm a big fan of the Apple family and having family in the south myself it helped related to their characters. Sweetie and Scoots are unknowns for me so I'd have to do a lot more digging and back story development I think. Plus, that pic is actually what inspired this story. It was too adorable and I just had to do something to Bloom because of it haha.
Really great story! Just pointing out that "Apple Bloom" is two words.
I don't know if I could stand strong like AJ or if I would end up being Big Mac and just giving her the jar. Great story. Makes me like the Apple Family more so than I did before I read it. Off to Scoots. :)
Just finished reviewing this story for the Goodfic Bin. However, due to several misgivings I have with it, I'm rejecting it from Goodfic Bin Submissions for the time being.
Full decision is here.
6544461 Well... depressing. But thanks none-the-less! It gives me something to work on and hopefully fix for later review and get the sequel ready for review too. Thanks!