Two friends during battle are sent to equestrian there names are master cheese and noicalenwahs aka viewing uncle This is a story based on my fantasies like me and my friends battlefield charters with our online names get sent to equestrian after an incident on the battlefield. (btw way this is also my first fic wish me luck :D"
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How I react to this story is heavily dependent on whether this story is just some spur of the moment project to be dropped in a day or two, or if writing fiction is something you actually want to commit to. Let me know which it is if you want any further response.
6298360 Sorry I've just been busy in these few days and was not able to get the time to continue ill try to post updates if I have time to im sorry for not updating ill try to get a chapter up if I can also any suggestions are welcome .
6299605 Being entirely honest, I wouldn't worry about throwing out any more chapters for this story in a hurry. Really, you need to go back to the drawing board and completely re-hash this story, or a story to replace this one. I am open to hearing about any ideas you have for this story or any others you might have in mind, but please contact me via PM if you wish to discuss them. But for now, I'd just focus on the base idea of a story rather than just publishing whatever comes out you head. That and you desperately need to practice on your grammar and punctuation.
I'm playing Battlefield 4 while reading this...
I like it and I only saw 3 grammar errors in the chapters so your doing fine, and this is a good story so far so don't scrap it.
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