Original Chapter 2
"...And that's the gist of things." Sunset finished a one hour explanation about Equestria, magic and suddenly thrown in questions.
Celestia and Luna both were left speechless, although in the corner of their minds, they noted that Sunset purposely left out details of her personal life as a freaking unicorn! Celestia rubbed her forehead.
"Okay, I try to sum it up. Your magic somehow went a little out of control and now you...look like this. I can see how this can be a little...inconvenient." the older sister said.
Luna shook her head, facepalming. "You really have a knack for understatements." she told her sister. "Well, I suppose we can make an exception for this one time. And let's hope this is just some kind of...fluke or something like that."
"I sure hope not." Rainbow said, flying in mid-air, instead of standing on the ground like the rest of the people.
"I sure don't. I have seen enough movies, thank you very much." Sunset deadpanned towards her friend.
Rarity in the meantime placed herself on one of the chairs in front of the principal's desk. She was sweating bullets and buried her face into her hands. The others immediately noticed this and surrounded her.
"Rarity? Are ya alright sugercube?" Applejack asked, while Fluttershy knelt down next to her.
"I'm...okay. I just have this overwhelming headache." Fluttershy touched her friend's forehead.
"Hmm, you don't seem to have a temperature."
"Then it might be related to the magic. My head feels like it's going to explode." Sunset touched her own forehead, leaning against the desk in the room. "And I have a theory why that is."
"Well spit it out already." Rainbow exclaimed, causing Rarity and Sunset to flinch.
"Rarity? It's right at this place where it hurts the most, right?" Sunset pointed at the point where it felt like a drill was working its way from under her skull to the outside world.
Rarity nodded and Sunset sighed as a result. "Alright. Sorry Rarity, but you'll have to endure it for now. You see, your counterpart is a unicorn and that right here is normally the place where a unicorn has her horn. However, since humans don't have the right materials in their body system to grow a horn, the magic isn't floating naturally through our body. Don't ask for the details. No offense, but I doubt any of you would understand them. However, I am positive this will go over once the magic disappears."
"Oh, I hope so, darling." Rarity groaned.
"I'm going to tell the teachers that none of you will be attending classes today." Celestia informed them. "Do any of you don't have a way home without being seen in public?"
Luckily for most of the girl's parents they were working late and would normally arrive much later than their children would. As about explaining this to each individual parent was left to each of the girls.
Sunset didn't have this problem, as she was living alone in a small apartment, consisting of a living room, a kitchen, her room and a small bathroom. Opening the first aid kit in the bathroom, Sunset took out some pain killers and choked them down without any water. Principal Luna had been generous enough to drive her home, even offered that the girl stay at the principal's home for the night, but Sunset had refused. She still got no message back from Twilight. Whatever the mare was doing, it must be very important or very tasking. Or both.
"These painkillers are good for nothing." she moaned, placing herself on the couch. She definitely knew what she would do for the rest of the day: mindless television.
Rarity woke up the next day, completely refreshed. It seemed the magic had finally worn off over night or whatever the right term was. She was just glad it was over. Removing the sleeping mask from her face, she walked towards her mirror and picked up her brush in order to get her hair at least somewhat presentable, before her mother got out of the bathroom. And Sweetie Belle complained that Rarity always took her sweet time.
Giggling at the little joke, Rarity got to work on her hair, not even having a need to look at the mirror. She observed the result of her work in the mirror and immediately dropped the brush.
"AEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!"
In her bed, Sweetie Belle turned around. "Ngh, I thought I put the hat back on the right mannequin."
In the meantime, Celestia just arrived herself at the front gates, when she noticed a car stopping at the public parking lot. This was unusual, but not unseen of, since certain circumstances forced students every now and again to arrive early. Celestia did raise an eyebrow, when she recognized the mothers of Lyra Heartstrings and another mother, of whom she didn't remember the name, stepped out of the vehicle. With them came out from the back of the care, Lyra and Bon Bon, both having pony ears, tail and one apparently a horn. Celestia resisted the urge to slam her head against the front gate. I should have become politician and run for presidency.
"G-good morning principal." the mother who Celestia forgot the name, greeted her.
"Good morning." Celestia glanced at her two students, before looking back at the adults.
"I-I guess you must be wondering about our daughter's...costumes." Miss Heartstrings stuttered.
"Yes, but not because of the reasons you think of."
"Huh?" both parents looked confused, while their daughters gave each other knowing looks.
Luna placed 4 cups of coffee on the table, one for each adult. The two had yet to get a satisfying explanation, because so far Celestia and Luna only told them they had an idea as to what was happening and had made in total six phone calls. In the meantime Lyra was excitingly scratching Bon Bon behind her pony ears, causing the girl to blush. It was actually no secret that the two were more than just "best friends" as they always insisted and Lyra still said she did this out of curiosity.
Finally there was a knocking at the door.
"Please, come in." Celestia called from the inside.
A second later, the door was opened by Pinkie Pie. "Hiya Principals! Oh, hi Lyra, hi Bon Bon! Heya Lyra and Bon Bon's mother." Pinkie jumped into the room after greeting everyone, followed by her five friends. The two mother's eyes went wider and wider with each girl entering the office, while the six friend's eyes widened as well, upon seeing the condition of Lyra and Bon Bon.
"Wait, so you guys too?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"Yeah, we kinda woke up like that." Bon Bon exclaimed, looking up with her eyes, as if she tried to see her ears.
"Buck me sideways." Sunset sighed and slumped down against the wall. "First the horn and now this? I'm gonna have a seizure before this is over." she rubbed her temples, levitating a plastic bottle out of her school bag. She opened it up with her magic and took a huge sip.
"Ah, no that doesn't do the job. I need some coffee."
"Uh...Sun?" Applejack called out to her friend.
"Yeah?" Sunset looked up, just noticing that everyone was staring at her with a mixture of shock and awe, or in Pinkie's and Lyra's cases only in awe.
"What are ya doing?"
"What do you mean? I'm just-" Sunset's eyes trailed down to the bottle she had in her hand. Only it wasn't in her hand, it was surrounded in a green light and floating above the ground. "Buck me sideways indeed."
"This can't be happening..." Lyra's mother whispered.
"See, I told you we have an alien in our school!" Lyra pointed excitingly at Sunset, who looked up at the mint green girl with a deadpan expression.
"You told her that I am a unicorn?"
"Eh....nope. Only that you're an alien, from another dimension, where magic is as common as water and that you and another alien are responsible for turning the most popular girls in this school into magic pony girls."
Almost everyone face palmed and Lyra's mother lost consciousness.
Celestia muttered something about "politics" under her breath and looked dreamily outside her window.
In the meantime, elsewhere in town
Neither Cadence, nor Shining Armor felt particular good this day and had to call Crystal Prep that they wouldn't come today. Cadence stayed overnight at the Sparkle household, she did this a lot as of recently, and so at least she could snuggle next to her boyfriend. Both had the similar symptoms, namely a splitting headache and in Cadence's case pain in her back.
They already went to the doctor yesterday, since it started yesterday, but he couldn't really help them. The conclusion he came up with was, while uncommon, the two must have eaten something the two are allergic to and now they have those symptoms. Of course they still needed to wait for the blood test results, but seeing as neither showed other signs (fever, rash etc.) he could only conclude that. Well that and that they probably overdid it the last time together in bed.
Strangely enough one of Twilight's self-build instruments reacted to them, but the two just shrugged it off.
"We really need to get Twilight out of that basement." Cadence sighed while simultaneously scratching Shining's and Spike's head. The lazy dog was curled up on top of the two on the blanket.
Shining took in a deep breath. "Yeah, but the others at Crystal Prep aren't exactly friendly to her. You know, with all those rumors going around, I wouldn't want her to make friends with any of them anyways."
"Well, maybe not with the students of Crystal, I have to agree on that one.
...
I know, the friendship games are coming up in a couple of weeks. Maybe she can make some friends in the school my aunts are the principals of. No scratch that, she should go there as soon as possible. Aunty Luna told me, almost everyone gets along with everybody."
"Hmm, well I am out of ideas. Maybe I should lock the basement and her room and hide the key, until she made a friend?" he chuckled.
"How cruel!" Cadence exclaimed dramatically, causing both of them to laugh and then to wince at the pain they were experiencing from their respectable headache. All of this caused them of course to shake and resulted in Spike falling between their faces.
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The horns came way too fast for my taste, but it was unavoidable. Well I found a way to even things out. This comment is for everyone who ignores the author's note in the second chapter.
how did this not show up in my feed
6413723 hmm? It's not really one of my best works, so you didn't miss anything special.
Very nice chapter, looking forward to Human Twily reaction to her brother and foal... ahm Babysitter future extra appendages
Next up they're going to either have pony fur and hooves or pony fur and muzzles.
6423036 Well, THAT definitely will take some time.
6423900
Well, at least I know it's coming. But here's a strange thing, I know that the movie themselves refers to the tails as "tails" but they're really pony tails at the end of the hair. When did they become actual tails?
6431990 Pff, I just go with the flow here. It's what they've been called in other stories
Honestly, you might have gotten more mileage out of this chapter if you'd lengthened it a bit. Maybe have each girl go through their own individual experiences at home before getting Celestia's call.
6431990
They're PonyTAILS.
Please update this
Wait, since Cadence was originally a Pegasus before her ascension shouldn't she just have back pain instead of both back pains and a headache?
6480220 Meh, I go for alicorn on her.
6480275 Lazy.
6480275 Alicorn is an ascended form, you really should just go with pegasus for Cadance, Otherwise you'll have to do the same for Celestia, Luna and Twilight.
6491192 Guess what the plan was? I'm pretty lax with the alicorn rules in this story. Why? It's fun. Leave me my fun. That's why I write these stories.
Well, you're off to an interesting start.
self-built.
Sorry, just had to be that guy.
Alright.... how long until Celestia and Luna end up with the same symptoms?
6487410
Alright, so here I'm replying to that comment, demonstrating why speaking with the voice of the author makes things confusing. You might not get what I'm trying to write in this comment, since I can only talk about the process of writing it. What you need to do is see things from my perspective. Picture a writer writing something, like I'm doing, and try to understand how doing so doesn't give the reader any information about what they're writing. All you can tell is that the writer's here, and writing something, and what they're writing doesn't come up, because I'm talking about myself, not the subject that my comment is supposed to be about.
6480220 They're being transformed into what their counterparts in Equestria currently are, thus Cadence becomes an alicorn now and so will Celestia and Luna.
Oh.
Twilight too yeah.
I hope you post more...
Oh this one is going to be a lot of fun.
Ooh, this looks fun.
There's a little issue here and there with the flow of writing not being as smooth as it could be, and I think some of the dialogue is a little off. Other than that, pretty solid writing.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
HiddenMaster out.
anymore?
New Chapter Plz!
I can't wait for more chapters, I wonder what's going to happened next.
Now this will get interesting...
As author you control the fic. Write the story your mind conjured.
As long as you don't pull a Pen Stroke and start editing in each additional season and character as they appear...
That got kinda silly.
7591275 Okay guys, note that I'll continue the story as it is now if more comments like this one here appear. I'll wait until Sunday evening, which is around 19 hours at my home from the time I posted this comment.
7591286 He really did that? Wow.
7591310 Really? Well, I can always rename the stuff...
7591524 Thanks for the opinion.
I say that if you do decide to rewrite the story, please just post it with the word (rewrite or new) in the title. And please wait until the new Equestria Girls movie is out for the rewrite.
7591971 Hmm, good idea actually, but I know my mind will be busy coming up with fanfics with that movie as well. I need to get my priorities straight. Hey, if I chant "Science! Science!" over and over, do you think it's possible to summon Twilight that way, so she can help making me schedule of some sorts?
anymore?
Is anypony alive over there? I agree with the others, we would love to read more about this unique and enteraining story.
PLEASE???
7593023
Please continue
As I see it, you have got the ball rolling whit thisone and I would like to see were this is going.
I can actually see this happening in the show (maybe when rarity lost her hair?)