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Scootaloo has it all: a job with the Wonderbolts, Rainbow Dash's friendship, her very own fans, and her own Cutie Mark.

But one night she starts having odd dreams that she finds confusing...dreams about her childhood. She doesn't know the meaning of all this...and the two ponies she had supposedly forgotten that have been a large part of her past.

Then she begins to realize the truth: Has she forgotten the two friends that made this all real?

This is my first fan fiction!

Inspired by Veggie55's comic, "Better Days"
http://veggie55.deviantart.com/gallery/33525968?offset=72#/d4czi1s

Chapters (12)
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Comments ( 92 )

looks good! cant wait for more chapters so i can read more :pinkiehappy:

also, FIRST! :rainbowwild:

Nice story. Can't wait for more Chapters. :derpytongue2:

This fic kinda makes me feel guilty for all the friends I've forgotten. Eunice, Claire, Ron, Sacha, Kyle, Navin, Micheal, C.J., Anthony, Julian, Evan, Grady, Megan, Hannah, Trent, Jeff, if you can somehow read this, I still rememeber you!
Seung-Yeop 'Chris' Cha.

I still don't quite picture Scoots as a Wonderbolt, but this is good so far.

Your first fanfic? your so awesome! you didn't even get ONE dislike! :pinkiehappy:
This pleases rainbow dash :rainbowwild:

First fanfic eh? Doesn't show, you write like a veteran! Keep it up, I'm really enjoying it.

That's some hardcore amnesia. I hope I never forget my friends. Great story
Also, I noticed a few formating errors :twilightsheepish: Find thee a proofreader.

This is beautifully executed. The chapter flowed wonderfully. Above all, I'm glad you handled Granny Smith the way you did, with the proper amount of sentiment.

hmm... I can't rightly tell how I feel. I feel that this excerpt has only graced the surface. My most blunt feeling is sadness that granny died.:applecry:
keep up the good work. BTW, I'm guessing I should expect sweetie belle next?

How is posible that she didn´t remember the CMC at all???? very impressive story, finally somepony understand that Dash has a crush in Soarin´and not for Spitfire or Applejack :rainbowlaugh::scootangel:

good work

didn´t expect that Granny was dead :applecry::ajsleepy::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry:


but good chapter, hope to see more soon :eeyup:

666160 it doesn't make deppressive but it's something you don't think about it often, you know the death of a character :applejackunsure:
anyway it´s a very good story, can't wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Nice chapter and great insight on Applebloom's situation.

Still, I'm kind of sad to see old Granny Apple gone. :fluttercry:

Please do keep up the good work. :ajsmug:

You have a lot of technique to work on, little sis Pinkie Diane Pie. But I'll help you out sometime if I'm not feeling lazy...which is rare :rainbowwild:

Really lovin´this story man, keep going with this, you have a lot of creativity :yay:

Great update as it going to be some reunion between the three friends. :unsuresweetie:

:ajsmug::yay::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile: great chapter can't wait for more

"make it take faster" doesn't seem like the wording you intended. But other than that, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!:heart:

Keep up the good work.

Very good chaprter :yay:

keep going with the great chapterss :scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:

Once again, nice update upon such a wonderful storyline. As I wonder what made Scootaloo forget her friends like that ? :unsuresweetie:

Also, Poor Twilight, still a bookworm after all this time. :twilightsheepish:

:fluttercry:

It's all to be said about this chapter and I'm sure that even Applejack could understand her little sister's reasons for sneaking out at night, because even she can value friendship. :ajsmug:

Great great little chapter :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:
i like the way of how the story is taking :ajsmug:

good work :scootangel::scootangel:

dammit scootaloo this is all your fault ! you make:unsuresweetie::applecry: cry you sick chicken pegasi hybrid

Interesting . . . i like the idea
I like Ruby too, for somereason when i read about her i got an interesting idea about her commiting sucide because of a disease :raritystarry::pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

great chapter, but i really hope that the next one is more longeer, really love this story :eeyup:

My bet was that the rustling was a chicken.

Another great chapter, can't wait to see how it all goes down.

Man, the suspense is making me feel....:derpytongue2:

I can't wait to see what happens next. :scootangel:

"Me too," Applebloom replied, "Applebloom...

Ummmmm

Found an error:
"Me too," Applebloom replied, "Applebloom says I can go and visit some ol' friends every once in a while!"
I don't think there are two Appleblooms ;)
But I really like your update cycle!

702282 Oops! Sorry, I was rushing. I'll fix it. Thanks for noticing!

Good chapter...
beside that error of theApplebloom-Applebloom( It should be a Changeling Applebloom or Applebloom has a secrete clone, but i think that the Changeling theory is more posibble :yay: ) that gives permissions to Applebloom :twilightsheepish: ;
it was good, finally the CMC are back together!

but it was a really short chapter :fluttercry: hope to see more, and longer next time :eeyup:

Now that's one strong friendship between 3 former fillies. :scootangel:

I'm glad to see things going so well so far. Let's hope they can continue on as the storyline progress.:raritywink:

Good heart warming chapter but you kept calling Ruby Sweetie Belles sister. but other wise a good read :rainbowdetermined2:

:pinkiesad2:
If only my sister was like Ruby...
Still, I win all the arguements.

ever hear of the words "aunt" and "neise"?:facehoof:

Good one, and now have to wait for the next chapter :eeyup:

Now that was a great chapter for Sweetie Belle as she finally bonds with her niece. :yay:

Great job on the update to this story. :scootangel:

720687 poorly edited on such a good story :applecry: next please please please check it over better!:heart:

720966 Sorry I was in a rush. I'm going to check over it.

It felt as if things were slowly adapting and going back to normal in a way. :scootangel:

Great job with the update on this story.

a like this story a lot :pinkiesmile:

but can you do like an update that is a little bit longer?? uhh... if you don't mind :fluttershysad:

great work

I'm having some sort of Writer's Block. Suggest anything and maybe it'll get published in the next chapter! THANKS:pinkiehappy:!

I have to say I do enjoy seeing this story as it shows the former friendship rebuilding itself into a much stronger bond, even for grown up fillies like the CMC. :scootangel:

i love a lot these stories about the CMC, they are amazing, but i feel that now the story has arrived into a stuck point , the last paragraph really sound like the end fo the story :unsuresweetie: , i think that the next chapter needs a kind of twist between the three to make the story more cooler ( i'm not seiing that it isn't, but you know...about... 20% cooler :rainbowkiss: ) , maybe involving their old enemies and a old crush from the past, maybe Featherweight i don't know, but anyway if you came out with a twist to this story to make it better, it will be awesome :pinkiehappy:

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