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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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With a heavy rain coming down upon Canterlot, Rarity goes home.

Thank you to Tatsurou for prereading.

Thank you to Blazehart for the wonderful cover art.

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Short and sweet, yet sad. Well done.

Nice little piece; went over particularly well with what I happened to be listening to at the time: Atelier Ayesha

Is it somehow connected to One Minute Spent Hiding Behind a Shroud? That, or burning Rarity's stuff becomes a trend in your writing.

Minor nitpick: I'm pretty sure "parasol" refers only to stuff protecting from the sun. In case of rain, it should be umbrella.

6277762 It is not. In fact, if ever someday I write a certain story I had planned out at one point, this would be a prequel to that, As it stands though, this is a story just by itself.

Sad...:fluttershysad:

So she lost everything in a fire and has only ashes of Opal, and a small mirror to remind her of the boutique.

Ouch, seems to me that there was a fire and Rarity lost everything she had in Canterlot and is returning to Ponyville to recover. And it looks like she gained a few scars from it as well going by the last lines.

Short, but not sweet. Hits hard and well.

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