Introspection

Rarity likes her job.
She really likes her job.
No seriously, she just loves her job.

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Regidar

Regidar #1 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 1 · ·

made to complement the tastes and appearance of each mare (and the singular stallion)

haha

Perception Filter

Perception Filter #2 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Good story, even if the bit at the end was a tad... out and out for my tastes (and it is just personal taste). I did see where it was going once I reached about the "middle" point of the story. Still, that's not a bad thing, and it actually set up the small conflict that was in the story very nicely.

Hillbe

Hillbe #3 · Jul 16th, 2016 · 1 · 2 ·

Beats working at the Hay Burger!

I love Hay Burgers!

You are a Hay Burger...

Love me!

Really Ms. Pie!

Spike!

wut? what?

A gal does need a hobby

TheZouave

TheZouave #4 · Jul 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

My one real nitpick, and it is a nitpick, is that the (let's call it a Loss Of Purpose attack) just suddenly came on. Usually things like that have a trigger, even if it's just a train of thought. I would have liked to see what was going on in Rare's head a little bit more.

Something to experiment with.

One of the things I liked best about this story was the shortness, the simplicity. No fat, no fluff, all story. Everything to the point, but done in such a way that the "Slice of Life"-ness was not compromised. As in you could have skipped the dialogue between Rarity and Sweetie Bell, but you didn't.

I may take notes, and use this as a reference for skipping time seamlessly. Your time skips are absolutely stellar; so much time with important stuff covered - well, mind you - in so few words. I'd call it skirtsian, but skirts does the opposite. How about Skirts-Tier?

I am just filled with awe at the moment. Definitely one of my more favorite stories.

SlashopentheSky