I openly admit I know almost nothing about Deadpool except his powers are Wolverines, he's insane, and he has a mouth that almost rivals me.
Hey, writer. If you were a rival to me you'd have your own show.
"Well I could someday."
Yeah, and maybe I can be with the queen of France. Stop talking to me and start writing this adventure already.
Well, anyway Pinkie and -
'Pinkie'? With a name like that she'd better be hot as Paris Hilton.
"Paris Hilton? Whatever, I've got a description to write and at this rate they'll decline it! Hush."
Fine, but I'd better see boobs or I'll... I don't even know yet but it's gonna be bad for you.''
Pinkie and Deadpool meetup and stuff happens.
Wow, what a great description. 'Stuff happens.' This'll get featured for sure, great job.
"Ah, sarcasm. I get it..."
Enjoy the read.
Yeah before I get flooded with comments about how much this sucked I honestly know so little about Deadpool... :)
Other than the fact that he gropes every female he sees, you're spot on.
Hehe I love it it's so funny
Hahhahaa can't stop laughing.!!
6269231 actually you pretty much nailed Deadpool. Though there would have been a little bit more internal dialog with his sane half I think. That being said, I think you did very well using two characters that can break the 4th wall.
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So that's his sane side?
I saw a few hundred memes and that's my influence.
Plus ya, two 4th wall characters.
Idk, after the movie comes out I'll do another
You know 6269231 this has been the most tame dead pool story I've ever read good job. Here is a thumb up
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Thanks, I think.
The others I have read were ok but really ridiculous this was great and a decent amount of odd not overloaded on crazy.
Read deadpool in equestria by Mr.Aquino you'll see quickly what I mean.
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Ooo, can you suggest one so I can see what the others are writing?
Also thanks, I figured he'd be a little balanced here plus it was only a 7 minute story (Their time)
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Well their is the one. I just mentioned I'll find a few for u and make a list of deadpool stories I'll send the list in a PM
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Wow that first chapter sold me on how much it sucked. Terrible grammar, about 70 exclamation points and I was expecting some emoticons.
Just awful...
It gets better as it goes