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What if you and all of your worldly possessions were in Equestira? Edward Anderson dies and befriends Charon the Ferryman who gives him a second chance at life in Equestria. Its irreverent, funny, and has a little bit of heart.

This is a story that I am writing mostly for myself to test the waters of shipping and portraying characters. It started as a self insert, but, as it turns out, I am REALLY bad at portraying myself so Ed is his own man. Please enjoy! Anybody is free to use any part of my story for their own gains.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 45 )

HIE and self inserts are pretty much everywhere, but the ferryman thing was lolzy enough.
I can believe it is fun to write and I don't blame you for it and considering I enjoyed the first chapter good enough to read it all the way through...

I'll be readin' this :trixieshiftright:

Very well indeed. Quite enjoyable. I don't read a lot of stories myself. At least those pertaining to fanfiction. Still, this caught my eye and I had the lucky stroke to read it. You've caught me. The long time I've been running here, I'm sure to read this one through. :yay:

I have a hard time picturing a small pony driving a minivan. I mean, the distance from the seat to the pedals . . . was the car shrunken as well?

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ponies are short on all fours, but they can be significantly taller on back legs. Its like a small Asian lady driving.

I've never seen a small Asian lady driving a minivan, and looking at Lyra sitting like she does and her legs don't even dangle really far over the bench . . .
Anyway, I find this story a bit intriguing, really. I may want to look where the next chapters take it to.

I'm quite liking this so far, Ed's character is simple, yet interesting.
Can't wait to read your spin on all the other 'mane' characters (if you do)

this story makes me laugh. liked and faved. please continue with it.

Sweet! The Charon concept is GENIUS! If I may, could I have permission to use a similar idea in one of my future stories? :pinkiesmile:

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For all I care you can take the plot of my story...if there was one yet...

This is just plain amazing.

The Pinkie Pie scene was just so... so... Pinkie :pinkiesmile:. There is honestly no way to really explain it.

There's just one thing that I have a problem with your story.
Your capitalization. Every so often through this chapter, you forgot to capitalize the beginning of a new line or when Edward was referring to himself. This sort of thing seems nit picky, I know, but it takes away from the story just a little bit.

Apart from that, I'm really enjoying your story so far. Keep on writing! :twilightsmile:

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Out of everything I am bad at in writing, that is the single most common mistake I make. Part of why I am writing is so I can learn to type like a big boy.

Sorry, bro. Only one dinosaur (dragon) at this party.

good job,man.have a mustache. :moustache:

Great story so far, keep it up!

LOOOOOOOLLLLLOOOOOLLOOOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
BLOODY GENIUS :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
BEST WAY TO SWAY A GOD GIVE HIM ALL YOUR MONEY:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

great story keep up tha funny stuff

Awesome. So.. how many more years until the next chapter? I'm curious to see the result of the experiment.

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Currently operating on one week in Valve-Time

1008260 One week and three days... Still a long time. I love this story
It's everything I want from HiE in a small box in Twilights basement. Update more often plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :fluttercry:

Woohoo! The great story has returned!
Bring us more tales of adventure O Wise one!

(read this out loud) So you're not going to delve into violence. What about violins?

Writer man. I am greek mythology savvy. Pegasus sprouted from the stump of Medusa's neck after Perseus cut off its head. Pegasus is immortal and was first tamed by Bellerophon, who was aided by Athena. Bellerophon, after killing the Chimera, got cocky and tried to fly to Olympos. Zeus killed him and took Pegasus into his personal stables and breed more to pull his chariot.
Just so you know. I know you are referring to Clash of the Titans, but it's still good to be properly informed. I take movies like as an offense to those who actually know their mythology.

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...ok?


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I am not so savvy... nor is my character. If it is any consolation I am referring to the old clash of the titans. I've tried to read up a bit on all the greek stuff I bring up and I tend to get overwhelmed by the names.

I will probably fix it to include proper mythological cannon.

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I fixed it just for you :twilightsmile:


Edit: Almost wanted a yo momma joke to rainbowdash "yo momma so ugly that she has snakes for hair"

1015487 That honestly worked better in my head.

Is the reason for the long wait between this and the previous chapter due to taking time to learn about MTG?

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HA! no. In truth I spat this out in 3 days. 2 sittings. I get distracted easily. Also: PAX was this weekend. And I didn't know what to write about till last week. Still don't.

Two more months and we get to see how this plays out! Lookin' forward to it.

Yay Update!:pinkiehappy:
also Sparkle Angry:twilightangry2:Spakle Smash!

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EVERYONE hates slivers. And artifact affinity.

I like it.

It's a bit different, the protagonist is funny, and the story is interesting.
Now, I demand at least a goodly number of new chapters within dawn. :pinkiecrazy:

please, do continue

This is some of the funniest stuff I ever read

the only thing i can say is thank you!

Thank you for realising what path this story was headed and decided to stop it in its tracks.

I cant wait to read the new story.

I rarely have faith in an authers ability but this realisation is one hallmark of a good auther(great would be not falling in the trap from the beginning but oh well)

1222907 Only if you can manage to get enough of them or the right combonation out on the table in a timely maner...

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